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amarantha-raven.livejournal.com posting in monaboyd Aug. 12th, 2004 12:33 am)Title: Goodbye
Author: amarantha_raven
Rating: PG
Pairing: Dom/Billy
Disclaimer: As far as I know it never happened. And if it did.... someone made a big mistake.
Feedback: It's like crack
Summary: Written for the White Flag Challenge. Completely un-betad and written during a break at work tonight. I tried to do mostly dialogue... don't know how well it worked though.
"Billy?"
*long suffering sigh* "What, Dom?"
"You don't really have to go.... do you?"
"Yes, Dom. I really have to go. We talked about this remember?"
*nod*
"But you'll be back, right?"
Silence.
"You are coming back right?" *slightly panicked*
Silence... again.
"Billy?" *full-on panic mode*
"No Dom, I'm not. Goodbye."
"But I..." *pause* "I love you."
"I know Dom." *click*
Dom sat there and stared at the phone. Any minute now Billy would be calling to tell him it was all a joke... a wind-up. Dom just knew he would. So, he sat and waited.
Three days later Elijah finally convinced him to stop waiting for what would never come. But he absolutely refused to stop loving Billy.
Author: amarantha_raven
Rating: PG
Pairing: Dom/Billy
Disclaimer: As far as I know it never happened. And if it did.... someone made a big mistake.
Feedback: It's like crack
Summary: Written for the White Flag Challenge. Completely un-betad and written during a break at work tonight. I tried to do mostly dialogue... don't know how well it worked though.
"Billy?"
*long suffering sigh* "What, Dom?"
"You don't really have to go.... do you?"
"Yes, Dom. I really have to go. We talked about this remember?"
*nod*
"But you'll be back, right?"
Silence.
"You are coming back right?" *slightly panicked*
Silence... again.
"Billy?" *full-on panic mode*
"No Dom, I'm not. Goodbye."
"But I..." *pause* "I love you."
"I know Dom." *click*
Dom sat there and stared at the phone. Any minute now Billy would be calling to tell him it was all a joke... a wind-up. Dom just knew he would. So, he sat and waited.
Three days later Elijah finally convinced him to stop waiting for what would never come. But he absolutely refused to stop loving Billy.
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omg that is so sad! but so good!
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That was...wow. Short, sweet, and to the point, hitting exactly where it hurt the most. That forlorn image of Dom sitting hunched over the phone, ignoring everyone that showed up, jumping whenever the phone rang, thinking it's Billy...Just superb. Absolutely perfect. *Tosses out own entry to challenge*
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Random: I <3 your icon!
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Thanks! I didn't make it, it's by
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(i've started writing ch6 of me fic- i'll try to get it to Sunday ish is that ok?)
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(That's perfect. Did you get the chapters I sent back to you? You should have through 5 back.)
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BTW, it was lovely. HORRIBLY PAINFUL, but lovely.
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Thank you! I loved this challenge.
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*snort*
Umm.... Goodbye? Simple. Short. Easy to fit on a banner. LoL
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*goes off to edit title*
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