Title: What happened, Billy?

Author: [livejournal.com profile] glorfinniel

Rating: PG-13 I think.  For naughty words...in size 14 and bold font.  :)

Warning: There is swearing in this fic in pretty large letters (!).  Not good to look at it at work/in front of parents etc.

Disclaimer: Do I really need to say this again?  It's not true although it should be.

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From: [identity profile] glitterbubbles.livejournal.com


YEEEE!! lovely, truly!! i'm so excited for the phone call!!!
despite reading your warning, i just read the fic in the school computer lab (as though i could've waited!!! LOL) so far no one's come to kick me out, though ;)
xoxoxoxoxoxoxooo

From: [identity profile] broksgurl717.livejournal.com


I see your photobucket account started working right again. I'm glad. That was good, I hope Elijah got through to Dom. I can't wait for more!

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From: [identity profile] anunhappytale.livejournal.com


I have fallen in love with this. Elijah has suddenly become quite sexy to me. Take charge Lij, very nice! Now, Lij, go kick Dom's sexy ass.

From: [identity profile] dani-grl4.livejournal.com


I love angry/proactive/matchmaker Elijah :) And I love this fic in general. Thanks very much!

~Dani~

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From: [identity profile] gabsy.livejournal.com


*does the "Go Elijah" cheeleading dance*

Way to go Frodo!!! ;-)

And WAY TO GO GLORFINNIEL I love this story, how it's not all "Well, I know you love me, I've said no before, hurt you by doing so, made you wait for a year, I just changed my mind, let's kiss and make up!" It's really realistic and the different formats are used to their best!

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From: [identity profile] theboysgonehome.livejournal.com


Gah! You kill me with the detail! The switch in colors, the progression of time on the clock, the fact that Dom's looking at surf stuff and Elijah's got Napster up . . . brilliant! And you kill me dead with the tension . . .

From: [identity profile] powerful-freak.livejournal.com

iloveyouiloveyou!


woooo! That's mah Lij!!
Now, Dom needs to just listen to him, and get his ass in gear.
And I love how Elijah has Napster open and Dom a surf shop...just great.
Please post soon!
<3

From: [identity profile] the-aloha-girl.livejournal.com


I love the format and all the little details everyone has already mentioned! and another chapter of "Write It In a Letter" *heavely*

*hugs*
Jewelz

From: [identity profile] zahz87.livejournal.com


hehhehe *huggles my Elijah* i knew there was a reason i loved him so much YAY!!

From: [identity profile] thewayforwards.livejournal.com


Go Elijah, Go Elijah, Go Go Go Elijah!
*doing a cheerleader dance*
*cough*
Okay.. sorry.. got a bit carried away *cough*
more? soon? please?
How am I supposed to go to bed and sleep now?
Oh, btw, love the email-addresses and the other explorer windows they have open while writing emails. It's brilliant and very well thought through.
*starts a glorfinniel-fanclub*
-- Malin

From: [identity profile] apple-scruffer.livejournal.com


Eeek! Fantastic! *dances for joy*
Yay, Elijah! *does spazmic dance in his honor*
Post the next part soon, or I will...do something drastic. *nods furiously*
*looks around for something to do*
*threatens to fall off a bridge* ;)

From: [identity profile] mc-honky.livejournal.com


Go Elijah, go go go Elijah! *becomes Elijah's personal cheerleader*

Poor Billy. Oh, if Dom doesn't call Billy soon I'll just die!
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