Title: What happened, Billy?

Author: [livejournal.com profile] glorfinniel

Rating: PG-13 I think.  For naughty words...in size 14 and bold font.  :)

Warning: There is swearing in this fic in pretty large letters (!).  Not good to look at it at work/in front of parents etc.

Disclaimer: Do I really need to say this again?  It's not true although it should be.

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From: [identity profile] crsty1961.livejournal.com


Way to go ELIJAH!!! ** cheers**
Love this !!

From: [identity profile] glitterbubbles.livejournal.com


YEEEE!! lovely, truly!! i'm so excited for the phone call!!!
despite reading your warning, i just read the fic in the school computer lab (as though i could've waited!!! LOL) so far no one's come to kick me out, though ;)
xoxoxoxoxoxoxooo

From: [identity profile] broksgurl717.livejournal.com


I see your photobucket account started working right again. I'm glad. That was good, I hope Elijah got through to Dom. I can't wait for more!

From: [identity profile] anunhappytale.livejournal.com


I have fallen in love with this. Elijah has suddenly become quite sexy to me. Take charge Lij, very nice! Now, Lij, go kick Dom's sexy ass.

From: [identity profile] dani-grl4.livejournal.com


I love angry/proactive/matchmaker Elijah :) And I love this fic in general. Thanks very much!

~Dani~

From: [identity profile] gabsy.livejournal.com


*does the "Go Elijah" cheeleading dance*

Way to go Frodo!!! ;-)

And WAY TO GO GLORFINNIEL I love this story, how it's not all "Well, I know you love me, I've said no before, hurt you by doing so, made you wait for a year, I just changed my mind, let's kiss and make up!" It's really realistic and the different formats are used to their best!

From: [identity profile] dani-grl4.livejournal.com


Well, you deserve it, dear! The format is very original which makes this fic stand out and is captivating. Yay :)

From: [identity profile] theboysgonehome.livejournal.com


Gah! You kill me with the detail! The switch in colors, the progression of time on the clock, the fact that Dom's looking at surf stuff and Elijah's got Napster up . . . brilliant! And you kill me dead with the tension . . .

From: [identity profile] powerful-freak.livejournal.com

iloveyouiloveyou!


woooo! That's mah Lij!!
Now, Dom needs to just listen to him, and get his ass in gear.
And I love how Elijah has Napster open and Dom a surf shop...just great.
Please post soon!
<3

From: [identity profile] broksgurl717.livejournal.com


Good.

I can't wait to read the next part

I'm glad. And you're welcome again. :D
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