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Hi everyone! This is my first attempt at writing RPS so I would greatly appreciate feedback and con crit.
Title: Three kisses
Author: Kali
Pairing: Monaboyd
Summary: A short ficlet about the first three kisses between Dom and Billy
Rating: PG13
Feedback: Would be lovely ^_^
Disclaimer: To my knowledge, this has never happened in real life.
Notes: This is unbeated so if you find any mistakes, please tell me so I can fix them.
They were drunk the first time they kissed. They’d been singing karaoke and knocking back pints as if there was no tomorrow. Liquor and general good cheer had mixed together inside Billy until he was pulling Dominic towards him for a sloppy, drunken kiss. They laughed about it afterward, and Dominic didn’t really think anything of it because it was just a harmless kiss and besides, Billy was always kissing people, it was just one of the ways he showed his affection.
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The second time they kissed, Dominic was exhausted. They’d been shooting battle scenes all day and his whole body ached. He shuffled along to his trailer, head down and arms hanging limp at his sides. Billy was waiting for him, absently flipping through a magazine. Dominic blinked at him surprise, too tired to do anything else, and Billy grinned at him, standing up and stretching as much as the small confines of the trailer would allow. He walked forward until he could feel his friend’s body heat and leaned forward, brushing his lips against Dominic’s. Neither of them spoke of it, because Dominic didn’t know what to say and Billy didn’t think words were necessary.
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Their third kiss was a long, slow one, complete with wandering hands and light caresses. They had just come back from the New York premier of Fellowship and Dominic had asked why Billy had been staring at him. Billy had, after a long hesitation, told him why. Silence fell on the room for a while and Billy was sure that he had just screwed up big time.
Then Dominic had kissed him, light like that last time, his hand stroking along Billy’s jaw. Billy thought his heart would explode in that instant, and had been too shocked to even think about kissing back until Dominic had tangled his hand in Billy’s hair, tugging just a little. That pulled Billy out of his shock and he started to kiss back, letting his hands lift up Dominic’s sweater so that he could feel the warm skin beneath.
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There were more kisses, many, many more where other body parts than just their mouths got involved, but to Billy, none of them are as important as those first three kisses. They were more passionate, sure, and more intimate, but nothing could replace that giddy feeling of their third kiss, the kiss that brought them together.
Title: Three kisses
Author: Kali
Pairing: Monaboyd
Summary: A short ficlet about the first three kisses between Dom and Billy
Rating: PG13
Feedback: Would be lovely ^_^
Disclaimer: To my knowledge, this has never happened in real life.
Notes: This is unbeated so if you find any mistakes, please tell me so I can fix them.
They were drunk the first time they kissed. They’d been singing karaoke and knocking back pints as if there was no tomorrow. Liquor and general good cheer had mixed together inside Billy until he was pulling Dominic towards him for a sloppy, drunken kiss. They laughed about it afterward, and Dominic didn’t really think anything of it because it was just a harmless kiss and besides, Billy was always kissing people, it was just one of the ways he showed his affection.
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The second time they kissed, Dominic was exhausted. They’d been shooting battle scenes all day and his whole body ached. He shuffled along to his trailer, head down and arms hanging limp at his sides. Billy was waiting for him, absently flipping through a magazine. Dominic blinked at him surprise, too tired to do anything else, and Billy grinned at him, standing up and stretching as much as the small confines of the trailer would allow. He walked forward until he could feel his friend’s body heat and leaned forward, brushing his lips against Dominic’s. Neither of them spoke of it, because Dominic didn’t know what to say and Billy didn’t think words were necessary.
----
Their third kiss was a long, slow one, complete with wandering hands and light caresses. They had just come back from the New York premier of Fellowship and Dominic had asked why Billy had been staring at him. Billy had, after a long hesitation, told him why. Silence fell on the room for a while and Billy was sure that he had just screwed up big time.
Then Dominic had kissed him, light like that last time, his hand stroking along Billy’s jaw. Billy thought his heart would explode in that instant, and had been too shocked to even think about kissing back until Dominic had tangled his hand in Billy’s hair, tugging just a little. That pulled Billy out of his shock and he started to kiss back, letting his hands lift up Dominic’s sweater so that he could feel the warm skin beneath.
---
There were more kisses, many, many more where other body parts than just their mouths got involved, but to Billy, none of them are as important as those first three kisses. They were more passionate, sure, and more intimate, but nothing could replace that giddy feeling of their third kiss, the kiss that brought them together.
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I definitely think you should write more monaboyd :-)
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Nicely done
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Catherine
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You should try writing some more for us:)
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