Title: Temptation    (...can't think of anything better!!)

Author: [livejournal.com profile] glorfinniel

Rating: Um, PG-13?  R?  I really don't know.  I'll say R, but then I'm English so I don't understand the rating system over there.

A/N: This popped into my head when I was at my nan's house, sitting in the same room as my 93 year old great grandmother.  Lucky she didn't ask/see what I was writing really, wasn't it?  I don't know why I thought of this, but I did and it needed to be written down.

Oh, and it's a double-drabble :)

‘You’ll have to open the door eventually, Dom.  You know you’ll have to let me in so I can sleep.  No use sulking.’

 

‘Piss off, Billy.’

 

‘You know you have to let me in.  You’ll be lonely if you try to sleep by yourself...’

 

‘Shut up, Billy.’

 

‘What will you do if you wake up in the middle of the night needing something?’

 

‘I won’t.  Go away, I’m mad at you.’

 

‘You’re not really.  You will be if I don’t kiss you goodnight though.  Or if I don’t take off your clothes, lick the inside of your thighs, kiss your chest...you’ll get mad then.’

 

‘Shut up.  Stop it.’

 

‘Oh, but I can’t Dom, because I know I’m right.  You know I’m right.  You know that you love it when I slowly unbuckle your belt, and brush fingers across your hips.  You can’t resist it when...are you listening, Dom?  You are, aren’t you?  I know you’re listening.  You’re probably touching yourself as well – that won’t do Dom.  Let me do that.  Let me touch you everywhere until you can’t take it any longer and you beg me to -’

 

The bedroom door opens suddenly and a hand hastily pulls Billy inside.

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From: [identity profile] canciona.livejournal.com


*applauds wildly*

Mmm, I like! Good to let that dirty mind of yours run free, isn't it? ;D

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From: [identity profile] 24-centuries.livejournal.com


*thud*

WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

Lovely way to resolve an argument =D =D =D

Thanks so much for writing this =D

From: [identity profile] light-the-sky76.livejournal.com


*applauds*

That was great! I like Sulky!Dom

It's probably just as well your Gran didn't ask you what you were writing, you'd never have been able to explain it to her :)

From: [identity profile] glitterbubbles.livejournal.com


oh, HOORAY! i got to read it! *dances happily* and... OMG, GUH!!! *incoherence follows* yummmmmm....
thank you!!!
*hugs*
xoxoxoxo

From: [identity profile] owl-at-the-moon.livejournal.com


Is there only me then that wants to know what goes on in the bedroom afterwards? Surely not! More please! *uses puppy dog eyes*

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From: [identity profile] natureofme.livejournal.com


I could totally picture the whole thing!
Loved it! You need to write down your random thoughts more often.

From: [identity profile] trash-puppet.livejournal.com


That's what we like to see. Silly Dommie, can't stay mad at Billy for long *g*

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From: [identity profile] digindeeper.livejournal.com


Ah, I just *loooooove* how Billy wheedles his way in, heeheehee. Clever, isn't he? heeheehee...awesome job la!

From: [identity profile] smlark.livejournal.com


PG-13 sounds just right!
Here are the actual U.S. movie ratings and my take on what Monaboyd fics should be (just my own personal opinion mind you)

G = General Audiences, everyone admitted.
Lets face it, we'll probably see none of that around this community.

PG = Parental Guidance Suggested
I'd take this light fluff, nothing that would indicate that there's a MM relationship (other than friendship) going on.
I don't know about you, but I'm not about to ask my mother if I can come play in the Monaboyd fic room!

PG13 = Parents Strongly Cautioned, some material may be in appropriate for children under 13.
Lord, I hope no one that young is lurking around in here!
This rating is probably what most of us write, definite indications of MM relationship, anything with the "F" word or other strong obscenities used as speech but not in action, light sex (kissing, groping, etc).

R = Restricted, Under 17 requires accompanying parent or adult guardian.
I repeat, I'm not bringing my mother!
This is the hot stuff, frenzied passion, sex to it's almost purest form...I could go on and on.

NC-17 = No one 17 and under will be admitted.
Too hot for me to even say!!




From: [identity profile] nakeno.livejournal.com


'Oh, but I can't Dom, because I know I'm right. You know I'm right. You know that you love it when I slowly unbuckle your belt, and brush fingers across your hips. You can't resist it when...are you listening, Dom? You are, aren't you? I know you're listening. You're probably touching yourself as well – that won't do Dom. Let me do that. Let me touch you everywhere until you can’t take it any longer and you beg me to -'

Yes. Thank you. And yes. *loves sextalk!Billy tenfold*
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