Wee Monaboyd Drabble

[i-heart-orli16.livejournal.com]

Heres a wee lil semi-angsty Monaboyd Drabble for yall
WordCount: 99


The first time a talked to Billy I knew. I knew I was in love. You know those moments of realization when something just up and smacks you hard in the face? That’s what it was.
*SMACK* It just hit me, and there was nothing I could do about it. And it was great for a while, we talked, drank and had loads of fun. We became best mates.
There was only one problem…. He didn’t feel the same way.

I fell in love, and he wasn’t there to catch me.


Feedback would be so ridiculously appreciated. I will give you cookies....and gorgeous pictures of our gorgeous boys... PLEASE!

Comments

[snickerdoodles.livejournal.com]

Oh -- I feel the angst.

[piratesorka.livejournal.com]

Thank you for knowing what a real drabble is. I hate it when people announce their drabble only to find out its more like a ficlet.
And this was just a tad angsty...like eating an appetizer!

[i-heart-orli16.livejournal.com]

yay! i know, I hate it when people say Drabble and its like 438929838592 words long.
thanks so much!

[loadedsixstring.livejournal.com]

I *did* read this...lol and then forgot to comment. ::headdesk::
I loved the imagery. And then, the last line. Is like ::whoomp:: the air just gets sucked out of you.

[i-heart-orli16.livejournal.com]

:) hehehe.. i caught you! ha. no, its cool.
im glad you liked it.
i told that once to my friend and he used the line in one of his songs (hes in a band)

[deesarrachi.livejournal.com]

I fell in love, and he wasn’t there to catch me.


*dies and is dead* So perfect. You really captured the essence of Angsty!Monaboyd in this short drabble. *lubs you*

One thing I noticed was that in the first line, it says "The first time a talked..." I think you meant the first time I talked etc.? I just noticed that.

Great, nonetheless. *huggles madly*

[i-heart-orli16.livejournal.com]

haha. oops. I sure didn't mean to do that......

But I am so glad you liked it. :)