Title: Ignition & Key
Author: Vensre
Rating: G
Pairing: Monaboyd
Itinerary: From the convention center to the Chicago Skyway, exiting onto 65 south to Indianapolis. Get on 74 as far as Cincinatti, then take I-75 through four states, cut around Orlando, and follow 95 the rest of the way down.
Disclaimer: The way that I can imagine is not the true Way.
Notes: Written for
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puddle_took's betaing genius. Dedicated to
aralinde.
Feedback: Will save my soul.
[Hawksley Workman - Safe and Sound]
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It's a long way, even for somebody used to driving on the wrong side of the road. Five or so hours in, Dom blinks away the little pattern overlaying his vision that means his eyes have been open too long, and takes the next exit. Billy's turn.
The decreasing road noise or that swooping curve off the freeway wakes him, so Dom doesn't have to. They idle in the parking lot of yet another McDonald's and grin muzzily at each other.
"Whose idea was this, again?"
"Yours. Probably."
"If so, then. Hnn. Sorry." Dom yawns and sighs and knocks his head against the doorframe when he gets out to stretch his legs.
They stagger inside to use the loo. Billy buys the least disgusting looking thing on the menu and cheap fancy coffee. Dom gets chicken nuggets and chips and a milkshake, and curls his lip at Billy's breakfast.
"That looks disgusting."
"Well..." Billy stares at his food. "Yes. That it does." He eats it anyway.
:~:
For an excruciatingly long time there was nothing but flat cornfields and featureless clouded skies. While he was awake, Dom was perpetually adjusting the ever-changing radio stations and playing a game in which Billy had to guess whether city names Dom was listing were actual places on the map. Now there are great rolling hills, the volume is turned down too quiet to hear anything more than hissing little drumbeats, and Dom's head is cradled forward in his seatbelt. Takes a kind of balance that Billy doesn't really have, he muses. Particularly not while asleep.
Less of a sunset, more of a bluegrey loss of light is happening. Sweet humid air flushes through the AC when it begins to rain.
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Rock juts up on either side of the road, and it is darker than dark. The wipers squeak as they work. Dom is hunched forward, reading the map by the light of the glove compartment and shaking his head.
"We should get a hotel. This explains why Sean laughed at us."
"What? Somethin' besides the obvious, I mean?"
Dom marks a scale rule on his finger and calculates on the back of his wrist. "Ever look how many times a map of the UK would fit into a map of the US?"
"...You're kidding."
"We have at least two more days ahead of us at this rate, Bills. Hotel. Hotelhotelhotel."
"All right! All right. Hotel."
"One with a buffet?"
"May as well. There's first and second breakfast taken care of, then."
"And a pool!"
The tires kick up a wake behind the rental car. Rain pounds down on the roof. And Billy squirts Dom with his water-bottle.
:~:
Dom is the one awake when daylight gets around to illuminating the mountains that have sprung up around them in the night, the ones they had known must be there from the wide, winding curves of the road. He picks one of the towns puddled in valleys along the pass and they descend to seek out a decent hotel.
Billy stirs from his nap. "It reeks of marker in here."
The back of Dom's hand now reads MIAMI OR BUST. Pleading exhaustion, he waits in the car while Billy procures a room.
Once in the hotel lobby, Billy is vaguely aware that he is drawing stares. But thinks nothing of it until the receptionist excuses himself and darts into his office, shuts the door, and has a laugh that is clearly audible through the wall. Billy ducks to check his reflection in the metallic finish under the counter, and learns that he has a curling, cartoon villain-style sharpie moustache drawn on his upper lip.
(It comes off with a little soap, as he has reason to know.) He cackles and pretends to twirl it on his way out, to the sound of the receptionist sliding off his chair.
:~:
They don't bother with separate beds. It would be ridiculous at this point.
Dom is honestly half asleep by the time Billy leads him to their (blissfully ground-level) room. Slowly they port their bags inside, under the wet daylight, and start shedding travel-creased clothing as soon as the curtain is secured. Billy claims the shower first, and within the five-minute interval (oh, ten at the most), Dominic is breathing sleep-slow. The suspicious bedspread has been shucked off onto the floor, and Dom's patchy sleeping bag is draped over the whuffling lump on the bed.
There is plenty of room for two to lay without touching - these two, at least - but they don't bother with that, either.
:~:
There are caves, in this part of the country, which have bats and blind white crickets and weird glittery rock formations. And up on the peaks there are frozen waterfalls with icicle trickles and cascade stalactites. And views ~ everywhere another incredible view.
Billy is reading, though. And Dom reins himself in from pointing out every panorama or interestingly-shaped boulder as their little car navigates the curves of the road south through the Great Smoky Mountains. Because sneaking glances of Billy's face, emoting rawly, absorbed in his book? Is every bit as great, to Dom's way of thinking.
:~:
Billy is in a mood. Dom tells him so.
"Rush hour in Atlanta, Dominic. And will ye just-- oh, roll down the window!"
"T's too hot. It'll never dry that way." He fans his hands, smirking.
"Don' know what they've been telling you in L.A. and I don' care. Putting on nail varnish during a tailback will never be cool."
There is quiet for a while. The elevated roads and multicoloured buildings give the city an alien look, all lemon and lavender, and almost clean under the smog. Dom shifts in a way that means what little restraint he has is running out.
"No, Dom."
"C'mon. Please? Just the left foot, then."
"I am not. Painting. Your toenails. While you're driving."
:~:
They have fresh oranges from a touristy roadside stand, and candy bars and bottles of soda in a little cooler. The pace is steady--
"Fffuck!"
No more than a dun flash careening from behind a stand of trees. Dom slams on the brakes, and everything spins hard and there is a noise behind the shouts. But when the semi behind them has howled past and the dust under the tires has drifted up the road a bit, the engine is still running, sort of. He puts it in park, laughing high in his throat and shaking like anything, and shuts it all down. Looks at Billy, who is clutching his chest-belt.
"Nice evasive action, there, mate."
Dom coughs. "Thanks." From the ditch of the speed lane - and pointed the wrong way, to boot - they watch cars zooming by. "Did you see what it was?"
"An armadillo?"
Dom knuckles a pressure point in Billy's upper arm. "Heh. Guess who gets to drive the whole rest of the way, Bill?"
Billy turns in time to watch the deer reach the opposite side of the dual carriageway and leap away into the sparse forest. "It's all right."
Another barking laugh. Dom's head falls back against the rest, eyes squeezed shut. "We could have both just died."
Billy's hand on his friend's forehead erases the lines that were gathering there. "We're all right."
:~:
The purple sky hangs oddly close as they ease down the boulevard, windows open to admit the salty breeze that hisses through the palm fronds even over the noise of the motor.
"Finally here. Finally."
Dom grunts. He is chewing down the last Baby Ruth like a starving man, the map crumpled onto the car floor.
"We should do this again sometime, shou'n't we? It was... fun." No reply. "It's not still about that deer, is it?" The car slows even more as Billy leans a little to touch Dom's wrist. "It was a close call, but--"
"Oh, it's not that. America is too big. No one country should take that long to cross by car. It's just... wrong."
"But imagine if we'd ha' set this film of ours in California. Surfing's good there, too."
There is a moment of silence for the horror of that much distance to cover in a cramped rental car. Dom's fingers thread into Billy's and rest there. "We'd have flown," he says fervently.
"At least this car doesn't stink."
"Eh, it sort of does, I thought."
"Well..."
"Yes."
Billy becomes aware of the scent of hot plastic. "Yes."
Their destination is in sight; yet another low, pale building of the coastal style, but this one with their names on it. The car crawls the last few metres into the driveway, then Billy kills the engine and they sit listening to the headlight alarm. Dom kicks his door open and sets his bare feet (complete with toenail polish) down on the still-warm tar.
"You ready for this?"
:~
{words: nail varnish, sleeping bag, baby ruth}
Author: Vensre
Rating: G
Pairing: Monaboyd
Itinerary: From the convention center to the Chicago Skyway, exiting onto 65 south to Indianapolis. Get on 74 as far as Cincinatti, then take I-75 through four states, cut around Orlando, and follow 95 the rest of the way down.
Disclaimer: The way that I can imagine is not the true Way.
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Feedback: Will save my soul.
[Hawksley Workman - Safe and Sound]
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It's a long way, even for somebody used to driving on the wrong side of the road. Five or so hours in, Dom blinks away the little pattern overlaying his vision that means his eyes have been open too long, and takes the next exit. Billy's turn.
The decreasing road noise or that swooping curve off the freeway wakes him, so Dom doesn't have to. They idle in the parking lot of yet another McDonald's and grin muzzily at each other.
"Whose idea was this, again?"
"Yours. Probably."
"If so, then. Hnn. Sorry." Dom yawns and sighs and knocks his head against the doorframe when he gets out to stretch his legs.
They stagger inside to use the loo. Billy buys the least disgusting looking thing on the menu and cheap fancy coffee. Dom gets chicken nuggets and chips and a milkshake, and curls his lip at Billy's breakfast.
"That looks disgusting."
"Well..." Billy stares at his food. "Yes. That it does." He eats it anyway.
:~:
For an excruciatingly long time there was nothing but flat cornfields and featureless clouded skies. While he was awake, Dom was perpetually adjusting the ever-changing radio stations and playing a game in which Billy had to guess whether city names Dom was listing were actual places on the map. Now there are great rolling hills, the volume is turned down too quiet to hear anything more than hissing little drumbeats, and Dom's head is cradled forward in his seatbelt. Takes a kind of balance that Billy doesn't really have, he muses. Particularly not while asleep.
Less of a sunset, more of a bluegrey loss of light is happening. Sweet humid air flushes through the AC when it begins to rain.
:~:
Rock juts up on either side of the road, and it is darker than dark. The wipers squeak as they work. Dom is hunched forward, reading the map by the light of the glove compartment and shaking his head.
"We should get a hotel. This explains why Sean laughed at us."
"What? Somethin' besides the obvious, I mean?"
Dom marks a scale rule on his finger and calculates on the back of his wrist. "Ever look how many times a map of the UK would fit into a map of the US?"
"...You're kidding."
"We have at least two more days ahead of us at this rate, Bills. Hotel. Hotelhotelhotel."
"All right! All right. Hotel."
"One with a buffet?"
"May as well. There's first and second breakfast taken care of, then."
"And a pool!"
The tires kick up a wake behind the rental car. Rain pounds down on the roof. And Billy squirts Dom with his water-bottle.
:~:
Dom is the one awake when daylight gets around to illuminating the mountains that have sprung up around them in the night, the ones they had known must be there from the wide, winding curves of the road. He picks one of the towns puddled in valleys along the pass and they descend to seek out a decent hotel.
Billy stirs from his nap. "It reeks of marker in here."
The back of Dom's hand now reads MIAMI OR BUST. Pleading exhaustion, he waits in the car while Billy procures a room.
Once in the hotel lobby, Billy is vaguely aware that he is drawing stares. But thinks nothing of it until the receptionist excuses himself and darts into his office, shuts the door, and has a laugh that is clearly audible through the wall. Billy ducks to check his reflection in the metallic finish under the counter, and learns that he has a curling, cartoon villain-style sharpie moustache drawn on his upper lip.
(It comes off with a little soap, as he has reason to know.) He cackles and pretends to twirl it on his way out, to the sound of the receptionist sliding off his chair.
:~:
They don't bother with separate beds. It would be ridiculous at this point.
Dom is honestly half asleep by the time Billy leads him to their (blissfully ground-level) room. Slowly they port their bags inside, under the wet daylight, and start shedding travel-creased clothing as soon as the curtain is secured. Billy claims the shower first, and within the five-minute interval (oh, ten at the most), Dominic is breathing sleep-slow. The suspicious bedspread has been shucked off onto the floor, and Dom's patchy sleeping bag is draped over the whuffling lump on the bed.
There is plenty of room for two to lay without touching - these two, at least - but they don't bother with that, either.
:~:
There are caves, in this part of the country, which have bats and blind white crickets and weird glittery rock formations. And up on the peaks there are frozen waterfalls with icicle trickles and cascade stalactites. And views ~ everywhere another incredible view.
Billy is reading, though. And Dom reins himself in from pointing out every panorama or interestingly-shaped boulder as their little car navigates the curves of the road south through the Great Smoky Mountains. Because sneaking glances of Billy's face, emoting rawly, absorbed in his book? Is every bit as great, to Dom's way of thinking.
:~:
Billy is in a mood. Dom tells him so.
"Rush hour in Atlanta, Dominic. And will ye just-- oh, roll down the window!"
"T's too hot. It'll never dry that way." He fans his hands, smirking.
"Don' know what they've been telling you in L.A. and I don' care. Putting on nail varnish during a tailback will never be cool."
There is quiet for a while. The elevated roads and multicoloured buildings give the city an alien look, all lemon and lavender, and almost clean under the smog. Dom shifts in a way that means what little restraint he has is running out.
"No, Dom."
"C'mon. Please? Just the left foot, then."
"I am not. Painting. Your toenails. While you're driving."
:~:
They have fresh oranges from a touristy roadside stand, and candy bars and bottles of soda in a little cooler. The pace is steady--
"Fffuck!"
No more than a dun flash careening from behind a stand of trees. Dom slams on the brakes, and everything spins hard and there is a noise behind the shouts. But when the semi behind them has howled past and the dust under the tires has drifted up the road a bit, the engine is still running, sort of. He puts it in park, laughing high in his throat and shaking like anything, and shuts it all down. Looks at Billy, who is clutching his chest-belt.
"Nice evasive action, there, mate."
Dom coughs. "Thanks." From the ditch of the speed lane - and pointed the wrong way, to boot - they watch cars zooming by. "Did you see what it was?"
"An armadillo?"
Dom knuckles a pressure point in Billy's upper arm. "Heh. Guess who gets to drive the whole rest of the way, Bill?"
Billy turns in time to watch the deer reach the opposite side of the dual carriageway and leap away into the sparse forest. "It's all right."
Another barking laugh. Dom's head falls back against the rest, eyes squeezed shut. "We could have both just died."
Billy's hand on his friend's forehead erases the lines that were gathering there. "We're all right."
:~:
The purple sky hangs oddly close as they ease down the boulevard, windows open to admit the salty breeze that hisses through the palm fronds even over the noise of the motor.
"Finally here. Finally."
Dom grunts. He is chewing down the last Baby Ruth like a starving man, the map crumpled onto the car floor.
"We should do this again sometime, shou'n't we? It was... fun." No reply. "It's not still about that deer, is it?" The car slows even more as Billy leans a little to touch Dom's wrist. "It was a close call, but--"
"Oh, it's not that. America is too big. No one country should take that long to cross by car. It's just... wrong."
"But imagine if we'd ha' set this film of ours in California. Surfing's good there, too."
There is a moment of silence for the horror of that much distance to cover in a cramped rental car. Dom's fingers thread into Billy's and rest there. "We'd have flown," he says fervently.
"At least this car doesn't stink."
"Eh, it sort of does, I thought."
"Well..."
"Yes."
Billy becomes aware of the scent of hot plastic. "Yes."
Their destination is in sight; yet another low, pale building of the coastal style, but this one with their names on it. The car crawls the last few metres into the driveway, then Billy kills the engine and they sit listening to the headlight alarm. Dom kicks his door open and sets his bare feet (complete with toenail polish) down on the still-warm tar.
"You ready for this?"
:~
{words: nail varnish, sleeping bag, baby ruth}
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Thank ye!
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For you and this fic and Dom and Billy and your writing and for you.
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::clingy glompage::~♥
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::big wet smacky kiss::
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^_________^
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And since I do? I am. Hahahahahaaa! ::glomp::
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That was just beautiful. I'm kind of at a loss for words, but that I was able to picture every scene you painted is wonderful.
Thank you for this, and for providing a much needed respite from schoolwork. Road trips are my life, and you wrote this in a way that made me feel like I was right there with them.
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Everybody, I'll be back when I can! My computer is busted! >_
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Well, that's it. I'm just going to have to fan you with palm leaves and peel you grapes. I'm done. In one of those slutty harem girl outfits, no less.
And now, for my weird feedback...
You know that red, that's like Georgia clay red (I don't know if you've ever passed through Georgia), and it's like chalk on your fingers, and red and brown and thick and thin at the same time? And cars driving by, covered in that same dusty red, and a few trees here and there, but mostly medium-gray sky, which means it's going to rain soon, and turn all that clay to earth?
It's like that.
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Fricking ::hearts:: your
weirdfeedback, dude. Seriously. And I've passed though Georgia. We always time Atlanta to fall on Sunday morning, so we don't get that traffic jam that I inflicted on Billy & Dom, but. I have that red dirt with me, I brought it back. I put my hands in the mud puddles at the side of the road, dragged my hands in the rust, and marked my face.From:
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I love you 'cause you drag your hands through the med and put it on your face.
I love you 'cause you're ven, and ven is love.
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*keymash* !!!
and this
(It comes off with a little soap, as he has reason to know.) He cackles and pretends to twirl it on his way out, to the sound of the receptionist sliding off his chair. (*snorkandglee*)
and this
There is plenty of room for two to lay without touching - these two, at least - but they don't bother with that, either. (*just loves*)
and also?
... I love you. *glee*
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Thank you! I adore your writing to pieces, and it always makes me so happy to hear from you.
::sneak-sneak-sneak:: ..::FRIENDS:: ::runs away::
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Thank you again, both for your delicious story and for your kind words.
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Thank you. <3!!
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hugs and love!
Jewelz
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As an aside, I too think a roadtrip fic (a long one) would be really awesome.
Dom gets chicken nuggets and chips and a milkshake, and curls his lip at Billy's breakfast.
"That looks disgusting."
"Well..." Billy stares at his food. "Yes. That it does." He eats it anyway.
::snort!!::
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Technically, there are a few little things that could use a bit of repacing. The deer scene has them too nonchalant right after, I think. Mayhaps it needs just a tad more, but not much. There were some other things that I thought needed some slight...ohhh something. We'll talk about it after I read it a few more times. I like this one a lot.
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Your exquisite language makes me go "nnggh." So, nnnghh--- there it is. And then...
he has a curling, cartoon villain-style sharpie moustache drawn on his upper lip.
(It comes off with a little soap, as he has reason to know.) He cackles and pretends to twirl it on his way out
... it makes me laugh so hard that I'm grateful for not having taken that sip of iced tea I was about to take, for it surely would have gone out my nose.
Just beautiful and effervescent. Just... so... so....
*goes speechless*
*kisses your feet*
&hearts
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And Billy squirts Dom with his water-bottle.
Great - you've got the nature of their friendship down to a t.
He cackles and pretends to twirl it on his way out, to the sound of the receptionist sliding off his chair.
*grins* - fantastic. Billy's sense of humour is just perfect.
There is plenty of room for two to lay without touching - these two, at least - but they don't bother with that, either.
Understated, subtle, and emotive. Wonderful.
Putting on nail varnish during a tailback will never be cool."
"I am not. Painting. Your toenails. While you're driving."
I had a friend who would apply nail varnish whilst we were on the bus. It always used to amaze me because nail varnish hates me, and applying it whilst sat at a table perfectly still completely eludes me, whilst applying it in a moving vehicle? Completely beyond me. But, it can be done.
This is lovely. I really liked it!
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(By the way, I've driven from Virginia to Nevada.. not fun. Not fun at all.)
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This was just fantastic all around. The little details of life on a road trip...the way time sort of stops outside of the car until you arrive and find that it's been moving all along.
Wonderful.
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The car slows even more as Billy leans a little to touch Dom's wrist.
::thinks she may be getting a little big-font happy in a bad way::
And I didn't salvage this. I just poked it a little. ^.^ You're really good enough to go without betaing, and I don't know why you think you need my help... ::nuzz::
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i really liked the flow of this; seemed so gentle and natural and mellow .. just like listening to "safe and sound." very well done.
i loved that random little bit where billy just squirts dom with his water bottle. it's a blink-smile moment :)
off to listen to both of those songs now, and then put all my hawksley cds into one big monaboyd-tinted shuffle for the night!
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I must read more by you!
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"That looks disgusting."
"Well..." Billy stares at his food. "Yes. That it does." He eats it anyway.
That sounds so much like me and my friend Nina it's not even funny.
And Billy squirts Dom with his water-bottle.
Very cute mental picture.
There is plenty of room for two to lay without touching - these two, at least - but they don't bother with that, either.
Eeee, perfect!
Billy is in a mood. Dom tells him so.
"Rush hour in Atlanta, Dominic.
That just sounds so THEM.
Lovely fic!
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"I am not. Painting. Your toenails. While you're driving."
*glomp*
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Am unable to leave more comprehensive feedback. But: absolutely YES. YES.
Brightened my night, that did.
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Was fab. With teh nail varnish and teh pastede on mustache and teh reading!Billy and teh deer and oh god i'm sleepy.
*is inspired to write porn-y alternate version of hotel room scene with spontaneous morning sex*
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I love you.
I ADORE this.
::LOVELVOELVOELVOELVOE:: Thank you for showing me. And forgive typos in the LOVELVOELOVE bits, heh. <3
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*dies*
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