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Title: Together apart from me
Author: maidenvixen
Rating: G
I disclaim the eyes.
Drabble


Every time i capture your gaze i feel a great pull in my gut. Its like a burning gaping hole opening everytime i realise, i'll never get that special look. That one where the cool slate of your eyes burns like ice and they sparkle with the love of a million stars. That one that sets the recievers eyes alight, his green pools stirring, mirroring the passion of your hearts.
I'll always be the one on the edge, the one whose big blue stare isn't quite good enough. I'll be the one burning with desire, whilst your desire is free to consumes your beings. Together apart from me.

Comments

[shnookersgab.livejournal.com]

I'll always be the one on the edge

For some reason, the simplicity of that line was awesome. You have the gift of being able to say so much with very little words. Good job!

[maidenvixen.livejournal.com]

:) thankies.
actually i think i might make a drabble from that line
*writes note to self*
thankies, you inspired me ;P