Title: The Finger, Part 5
Author: [livejournal.com profile] dylan_dufresne
Pairing: BB/DM
Rating: Light R, maybe.
Summary: Another installment in The Finger Series, because the Muse keeps feeding me the words. It’s not quite complete, but it’s getting there. Hope you enjoy!
Feedback: Would be greatly appreciated as it’s my drug of choice.
Disclaimer: Not at all true in reality. This is my imagination at work.
A/N: For my beta, [livejournal.com profile] frojane, in the hopes that it brightens her day. Thinking about you, hon.
Previous Parts: Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4
ETA: I suck and posted this in the wrong place, then deleted it, only to realize that people had commented on it. Arg! Sorry about that. I obviously need sleep.

Part 5

Dom’s passion-glazed eyes greedily drink in the tantalizing sight of Billy’s furry chest, murmuring his approval as he draws his long fingers through the gingery hair and over the pale skin beneath.

“Shhh,” Billy cautions, kissing the tip of Dom’s squashed up nose as he cups Dom’s bare hip, slowly sliding his hand higher to stroke Dom’s flat abdomen. “Lij and Sean.”

“Huh?”

“Last night. We all stayed. They’re right down the hall,” Billy reminds him. “It’s early, so we need to be quiet. Make sure we don’t wake them.”

Unsure what to make of Billy’s statement, Dom falters. “Okay.”

“Unless you want an audience, of course,” Billy adds with a small smile.

“Right.”

Catching the sudden uncertainty that flashes across Dom’s face before he tries to hide it, Billy asks, “You alright, Dommie?”

“Yeah, ‘m fine. I just realized that if they did walk in, and I didn’t wake up, it would be proof that I wasn’t dreaming all this,” Dom explains softly, his eyes unable to meet Billy’s, instead focusing several inches lower, to the furry chest pressed against the palm of his hand.

“It’s not a dream,” Billy murmurs tenderly, tipping up Dom’s chin so their eyes meet. “It’s real. Promise.”

“I’m starkers,” Dom realizes, his cheeks flushing.

“Believe me, Dommie,” Billy replies hoarsely, green eyes smoldering as his hand slides down to cup a bare cheek. “I know.”

For the first time, Billy rocks his hips forward, bringing their hard erections together, only the thin cotton layer of Billy’s boxers separating them. Dom’s not prepared for the reaction his body has when they come into intimate contact, crying out breathlessly as his back arches and a long leg wraps around Billy’s hip.

“Shhh,” Billy hisses under his breath. “They’ll hear.”

“Don’t stop,” Dom whimpers softly. “Please.”

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Part 6

From: [identity profile] darkerbreed.livejournal.com


So there's another thirty parts then? *looks hopeful* ;p *bribes you and your muse with cookies.*

From: [identity profile] crsty1961.livejournal.com


So reposting my posting ;)

**GUH** O.O
Oh please don't just leave it there. Your a horrible tease Dylan you
know this right.


From: [identity profile] babydazzle.livejournal.com


OMG....this is SO hot. I love how ultra-sensitive Dom is. *eyes rolling back*

It's also really sweet at the same time. I love the way you write Dommie. He's so precious and lovely. I always wished Mistake Number Three could go on forever.

You always lead me to my happy place. Thank you!!!!

P.S., do you have plans to write more on your drabble "ill"?


From: [identity profile] babydazzle.livejournal.com


Damn! 100,000 words??!!!!???? Holy Cow! *bows to you* I can't wait to read every single one!! :D I'm thrilled that you're working on another series! I'll be checking my f-list frequently in anticipation! I'm glad you're considering writing more on Ill, and I just love Finger! Brava!

From: [identity profile] babydazzle.livejournal.com


Wow. I'm averaging about 1,000 words per night, and I feel like I'm moving at a snail's pace. I know what you mean about work. I do kitchen design (with lots of math) by day, and then come home and write at night. My husband thinks I'm nuts.

I'll be looking forward to anything you write. ;)

From: [identity profile] surreality-fan.livejournal.com


*turns over the chocolate*

i go away for a few days and i come back to such fingery goodness!

From: [identity profile] pippins-penny.livejournal.com


I love how you are doing this slowly! So hot especialy with Sean and Elijah down the hall!

From: [identity profile] mmmarmalade.livejournal.com


Mmm, this fic is like having melted Belgian chocolate slowly drizzled into my mouth while someone tickles an ostrich feather over my body. Yum.

From: [identity profile] celtprincess13.livejournal.com


Oh, lovely. *melts*

Poor Dom, so afraid to believe his dream is coming true. And the added element of possible discovery? Brilliant!

And woot! for new long Dylan fic in the pipeline. *waits, mostly patiently* Glad to see the Muse hasn't deserted you.

From: [identity profile] shelley6441.livejournal.com


AW! You are a terrible tease, and so is Billy. I just hope there's some, ahem, slippery substance nearby to make things easier for Dom. Please, please, please let Billy overwhelm him with all the good stuff. And I concur with the other reviewers - I do love aroused, impassioned Dommie :)
*please forgive my selfishness* Thank you

From: [identity profile] frojane.livejournal.com


Been offline for a couple of days and this was wonderful to come back to! You are such a tease to stop there though!!


Psst Just about to do some more betaing and send it to you.

*huge hugs*

From: [identity profile] imogen-star-dom.livejournal.com


Oh I've just tumbled in part way through... Don't stop now tho. *please?*
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