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wook77.livejournal.com posting in
monaboyd Sep. 1st, 2006 03:52 pm)
I'm a bit shy about putting this out here but I'll give it a try...
Title: Water of Life
Author:
wook77
Pairing: Monaboyd
Rating: PG
Summary: In the quiet mornings, between fully waking, a moment drags on and Billy wonders.
Feedback: Please! Concrit is always welcomed.
Disclaimer: I don't them, have never met them. This never happened as far as I'm aware. No harm meant.
A/N: My first time writing Monaboyd although I've written in plenty of other fandoms before. Written for a very good friend of mine.
Quiet moments, like right now with his head pillowed on a shoulder, were his favourites. He enjoyed the feather-light drift of fingers down his back, so subtle he might think they were his t-shirt moving in the wake of the fan but he knew that it wasn't.
These were the moments that Billy cherished the most. Dom, when awake, was larger than life. Constantly in motion, taking the piss faster than Billy could think at times, Dom kept Billy on his toes and he appreciated it. He did, truly, but he also cherished these moments when Dom would brush his fingertips down his back or across his arm, walking so lightly. "Bug kisses" he'd call it and Billy smiled as he remembered.
Dom must have felt his face change with the smile because the light touches stopped and Billy shifted, as if he were just waking. When Billy opened his eyes, Dom's face was so very close. For a moment, Billy wanted to lean in that hairs-breadth and touch, lip to lip. That would be a brilliant way to start the morning and wasn't that a shock? He'd never had these sorts of feelings for another bloke but Dom… Dom was Dom, really. That's all there was to those feelings. Dom was more than a gender. Dom was a bit like whisky, water-of-life.
As Billy compared Dom to whisky and life, the moment of eye contact stretched on, breath puffing from one set of lips to the other.
It would be a tip of the chin for the lips to touch.
It would be one tiny little gesture, an inch or two separating them.
It might as well have been a chasm. That inch held the difference between remaining mates, best mates, and becoming more.
The moment continued, eyes staring unblinking at one another and Billy's eyes ached to blink, to restore a bit of moisture but then, the moment… and Dom blinked. Billy quickly followed suit. The press of lips against his sent his eyelids flying open again.
For all those long mornings spent staring, those moments that stretched to infinity and beyond, in the blink of an eye, they became more.
Title: Water of Life
Author:
Pairing: Monaboyd
Rating: PG
Summary: In the quiet mornings, between fully waking, a moment drags on and Billy wonders.
Feedback: Please! Concrit is always welcomed.
Disclaimer: I don't them, have never met them. This never happened as far as I'm aware. No harm meant.
A/N: My first time writing Monaboyd although I've written in plenty of other fandoms before. Written for a very good friend of mine.
Quiet moments, like right now with his head pillowed on a shoulder, were his favourites. He enjoyed the feather-light drift of fingers down his back, so subtle he might think they were his t-shirt moving in the wake of the fan but he knew that it wasn't.
These were the moments that Billy cherished the most. Dom, when awake, was larger than life. Constantly in motion, taking the piss faster than Billy could think at times, Dom kept Billy on his toes and he appreciated it. He did, truly, but he also cherished these moments when Dom would brush his fingertips down his back or across his arm, walking so lightly. "Bug kisses" he'd call it and Billy smiled as he remembered.
Dom must have felt his face change with the smile because the light touches stopped and Billy shifted, as if he were just waking. When Billy opened his eyes, Dom's face was so very close. For a moment, Billy wanted to lean in that hairs-breadth and touch, lip to lip. That would be a brilliant way to start the morning and wasn't that a shock? He'd never had these sorts of feelings for another bloke but Dom… Dom was Dom, really. That's all there was to those feelings. Dom was more than a gender. Dom was a bit like whisky, water-of-life.
As Billy compared Dom to whisky and life, the moment of eye contact stretched on, breath puffing from one set of lips to the other.
It would be a tip of the chin for the lips to touch.
It would be one tiny little gesture, an inch or two separating them.
It might as well have been a chasm. That inch held the difference between remaining mates, best mates, and becoming more.
The moment continued, eyes staring unblinking at one another and Billy's eyes ached to blink, to restore a bit of moisture but then, the moment… and Dom blinked. Billy quickly followed suit. The press of lips against his sent his eyelids flying open again.
For all those long mornings spent staring, those moments that stretched to infinity and beyond, in the blink of an eye, they became more.
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*sigh*
No need to feel shy, dear. That was gorgeous.
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I hope you write more monaboyd and I look forward to reading more of your stuff if you do! :)
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and
Dom was Dom, really. That's all there was to those feelings. Dom was more than a gender.
made me smile. The whole piece felt very happy and slow like a Sunday morning. Perfect for Billy to reflect on his relationship with Dom. :)
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THank you for your kind words!
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Thanks ever so much for your kind words!
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I definitely plan on it, no matter how shy I am over my work.
You've made my evening!
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Thanks so much for your kind words!
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I appreciate your kind words!
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I really appreciate your kind words!
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I really appreciate your kind words!
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Oh WOW.
This was so lovely, and I mean that in the truest sense, it was LOVELY. The writing was so graceful and soft and flowing, and the boys. were. beautiful.
Thank you, sincerely, for posting this, and I really really hope you write more. The fandom needs as many fics like this it can get. :)
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I definitely will be writing more as I've claimed this pairing at seven sins and have plotted out a 7 part story.
You've just made my evening with this comment, truly. Thanks so so much!!!!
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ah, such a Dommie thing. I really like that. *smile*
Dom was Dom, really. That's all there was to those feelings. Dom was more than a gender. Dom was a bit like whisky, water-of-life.
Totally cool way to sum up the boys, like in one of those "25 words or less" type of summaries. (erhm... 26) *grin*
Hope to read more of your monaboyd in the future.
Kerry =)
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They are such addictive creatures these two. You write them very well you know. So much of how I think of them is distilled in this piece it's a bit scary. I'm glad to see that you plan to offer more. I'm afraid that the 12 step program won't be offered again due to lack of interest by those afflicted.
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And YAYNESS for writing more! I'm very much looking forward to reading!!! :D
And I love your icon. LOL
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I definitely plan on writing more. They're just so addictive that I can't really resist.
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I wouldn't have signed up for the 12 Step anyway *winks* I enjoy my addiction far too much :).
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