Debts, Dates and Denial, Ch 9 (Charlie/Shark, NC-17)

[alassenya]

In which Rory loses his temper, but makes up for it.
For introduction, warnings and disclaimers please see Chapter One.
Chapter 9

Comments

[daydreambeleevr.livejournal.com]

"I'm not a gangster. I'm a m-moneylender, got it?"

This is yet again another tiny glimpse into the life of a very complicated man. It's interesting to see what makes him tick, and to see how he sees himself. You just know his dad has to be a right bastard, and he learned at his father's knee to be what he expected a man to be. Rory is an intriguing man to study, and I like seeing yet a different facet to his character. I was extremely disappointed to see that the story will be going on hiatus until July 22nd, but I understand you have to feel good with what you have to offer, and I appreciate the time and effort you're putting into this story. I will look forward to you renewing this saga when you're ready.

thanks,

Kerry =)

[alassenya]

I'm really sorry about the break. I've been doing a lot of work over the last fortnight (I wrote 15,000 words!) but it's the revisions and editing that will take the time. I'm not sitting on my arse watching the World Cup, I promise you!

Kudos to you on picking up yet more of Rory and his background... just wait for ch 10.

[(Anonymous)]

Ohhh -- I'm going to miss this story for the next month!

You've written such a complex and interesting bunch of characters. The sexy part itself is lovely, but it's your characters that make me look forward so much to each installment.

Here's hoping that these two complicated men can support and help one another, while finding a little much-needed love along the way.

I'll mark my calendar for July 22, with much anticipation.

[alassenya]

Thank you - that's a lovely comment. I hope that the second half of the story lives up to your expectations.

[lancslass.livejournal.com]

I'm going to be away when you post the next chapter. How am I going to relax on my hols knowing I'll be coming back to two chapters? I'll be praying for a tail wind on the flight back.
I've enjoyed the back ground history to both these characters as much as the present time lives. I love it, and my calender is also marked even though I'll be away.
My computer and internet connection had better be working when I get back or there will be hell to pay for.

[alassenya]

Thank you - I'm really glad that you're enjoying the story. Normal posting will resume next week. I have done heaps of work (just a wee bit more to write in Ch 18), adn, as always, I'd like more time for editing, but it's pretty well finished. Then there's all the rest of the C100 prompts...