Drabble- Invisible- PG-13

[flybynite29.livejournal.com]

Drabble: Invisible
Word count: 100
Author: Flybynite29
Rating: PG-13 for insinuated m/m.
Pairing: DM/BB
Summary: Billy's become the invisible man.
Warning: Angst/ hint of drug use
Feedback: Greatly appreciated. : )

Author's note: In a mood, and oddly looking thru Billy's eyes this time instead of Dom's.





'Finally happened, then... Dommie's gone to the Darkside.' Billy laughed, covering the tears.

The endearing awkwardness in Dom's walk had vanished- he not only belonged on the red carpet, now; he owned it. Billy had once been Dom's drug of choice; now his eyes darkened with something that was not lust. Thinning hair and laugh-lines traded for breast implants and plastic smiles. One had become two again. Dom's place was in the sun, now. Billy was left to shadows.

Invisible.

Billy avoided mirrors these days, unable to look into the glass, afraid he'd see no-one at all looking back.



- End.

Comments

Beautimus.

[garuparu90.livejournal.com]

Billy had once been Dom's drug of choice; now his eyes darkened with something that was not lust. Thinning hair and laugh-lines traded for breast implants and plastic smiles. One had become two again.

Poetry.

Re: Beautimus.

[flybynite29.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for the fabulous feedback, I really appreciate it. : ) So glad you liked.

[blackbird-song.livejournal.com]

This is devastating and beautiful. I think it's a scenario about Dom that we all hope won't be happening for real, at least in the way you describe here. It's certainly a worry I've had, at times.

Poor Billy. It's so hard to be at that stage of a life, and so important to try to make sure that it never happens that way.

Thank you for posting this.

Catherine

[flybynite29.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for the detailed and lovely feedback. : ) I agree- I certainly hope this isn't something that could happen for real. Not to our Dom.

And, yes, that stage of life is terribly tough to go through- I can identify with this Billy.

Thanks again, so very much, for reading and commenting! : )

[rane-ab.livejournal.com]

That's lovely! Thanks for sharing. :-)

[flybynite29.livejournal.com]

You're very welcome- and thank you, for the great feedback! : )

[loozy.livejournal.com]

Tears me heart out because it hurts so much :'(

[flybynite29.livejournal.com]

It hurt to write, a bit, too. : (

Thanks so very much for reading and commenting; I surely appreciate it. : )

[talia-sparkle.livejournal.com]

Beautiful and bleak.

Such an insight into his psyche in such a small amount of words

My heart just goes out to Billy... :(