FIC: Western Lovers: Cowboys & Archaeologists 24/31

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Title: Western Lovers: Cowboys and Archaeologists 24/31
Author: sassywitch
Pairing: BB/DM with a smattering of VM/LT and DW/OB
Rating: NC-17, to be on the safe side.
Summary: Billy is a man to be reckoned with. Can Dom heal his wounded soul and his own into the bargain. Could Billy make him forget the bitter lessons of the past?
Feedback: Feedback is my writers crack, which is not to be confused at all with plumbers crack.
Disclaimer: Not at all true in reality. These men whilst adorable and perfectly happy to slash themselves, their actual relationship is something that they only know. This story is adapted from a series of books that I adored when I was younger written by Elizabeth Lowell.
Word Count: 3759
Header Art: Courtesy of the incredibly talented loki_girl
Previous Chapters: can be found Here
A/N: A huge thank you to dylan_dufresne for the inspiration, the prodding and the beta. She really deserves far more credit than just beta. This fic wouldn't be what it is without her labour of love. My grammar sucks really, really badly so she had to suffer it so nobody else would. Next Chapter on Wednesday.

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Dom woke slowly, his eyes lazily fluttering open. As his mind slowly remembered the events of the last thirty six hours, Dom's arms instinctively tightened around Billy protectively, his long fingers stroking the smooth skin of Billy's back, his own tactile nature reassuring his mind that his lover was there. Finally awake, gazing drowsily into Billy's relaxed, sleeping face, Dom's fingertips trailed feather-light across bandage covering Billy's forehead, and a shudder ran along his spine at the possibility of losing his love so soon after he had found him, especially when Billy was giving them so little time.

Stomach growling loudly, Dom knew it wouldn't be long before his hungry rumbling and groaning belly woke Billy. Brushing his soft lips across Billy's forehead, Dom slid carefully out from around Billy's supine form. Rising to his feet, Dom stretched lithely, quietly moaning as he reached over his head and worked the kinks out of his back, the subtle, dawn sunlight kissing his naked skin warmly.

Pulling his previously discarded shorts on, Dom rummaged in their food stores, producing a package of chocolate biscuits that had somehow escaped his prior scrutiny. Eagerly, Dom opened the package quickly, long fingers pulling a creamy, chocolate morsel from the cellophane and sliding it into his mouth. Three biscuits later and hunger appeased, Dom's eyes were drawn again and again to Billy's restless, sleeping form.

A thought taking shape in his mind, Dom reached over and pulled his sketch pad out of his pack. Sitting cross-legged on a cool, sandstone ledge near their bed pallet, Dom's pencil flew over the paper, quickly sketching the sleeping man. Billy's restless sleep caused him to toss and turn on the feather-filled softness beneath him, his movements dragging his bedclothes lower until they slid down on his hips to barely maintain his modesty, the hint of a nest of curling hair appearing above the edge of the blankets.

Entranced by the beauty of his lover, Dom gazed at the pale skin that never held the rosy tint of the sun that kissed it, always failing to tan, despite the hours spent outdoors. Instead, freckles that matched the soft, ginger highlights of Billy's hair were scattered across his ivory skin, the curls covering his chest in a furry mat begged to have long fingers drawn through them, and slender hips below a slightly poochy belly that bore the same nest of finely curling hair. Dom sighed loudly, and distracted from his drawing, he leaned forward, elbows on his sketch book as he watched, fascinated by the steady rise and fall of Billy's muscular chest.

Pencil pushed behind his ear, Dom slid his sketch book to the side and wrapped his arms around his bare legs, watching hungrily, and with his chin resting on his knees, Dom resisted the temptation to crawl back onto the bedroll and cradle Billy in his long arms. His lips trembled with the need to kiss Billy, as he watched Billy's tongue moisten his slightly parted lips.

Captivated by his lover's unconscious actions, Dom watched as one of Billy's hands slid across his chest, small fingers brushing across one of his nipples. Even as Dom watched, the tiny, deep pink nubbin hardened under Billy's attentions. Torn between the voyeuristic pleasures he was currently enjoying, and the possibility of crawling into the bedroll and fulfilling whatever it was that was playing inside Billy's sleeping mind, Dom watched as Billy's hand traced a teasing path through the lightly furred skin of his belly. Eyes sliding lower, Dom couldn't withhold the low moan of longing that slipped from his lips as he realized that whatever it was Billy was seeing in his dreams, he was desperately arousing himself. Billy's growing erection, barely hidden by the blankets, was now fully exposed as Billy's firm legs moved restlessly, striving to retrieve the friction that the blankets had provided.

As Billy's small hand closed around his arousal, Dom's slid to the front of his own shorts, his fingers pressing against the growing erection, desperate to match the slow, easy rhythm of Billy's hand. A thickly accented word left Billy's lips on a breathless sigh, and Dom scrambled forward, his hands pressed against the bedroll at Billy’s side, his jean shorts pulled taut across his aching arousal, eyes transfixed by Billy. Mesmerized by Billy's hips stuttering forward, Dom watched as Billy plunged his cock into his tightly fisted hand as it stroked, and achingly aroused by Billy's words, Dom heard his own name lovingly whispered, over and over again.

While Dom's hands frantically unbuttoned his jean shorts and pushed them down his legs, Dom's eyes never left Billy, his tongue tracing suddenly dry lips as he gazed at the glistening tip of Billy's arousal, disappearing into his tight fist. Seeing the glistening fluid leaking from the head of Billy's hard erection, Dom hungrily remembered the taste of his lover in his mouth. Billy's hips lifted, arching into his own touch, hungry for the release that was beginning to race through his body. With his feet flat on the ground beneath him, thigh muscles straining as he pushed up into his hand, soft moans torn from Billy's lips as his breath grew shallow, head tossing from side to side as he begged for his Dommie's touch.

"Fuck me, Dommie," Billy whimpered brokenly, his hips beginning to thrust erratically into his hand.

Eyes glazed with desire, Dom's strength failed him as he listened to Billy's passionate pleas, and barely able to resist his own desperate need to touch Billy, Dom couldn't withstand Billy's guttural, pleading brogue. Scrabbling inelegantly forward across the bedclothes, Dom straddled Billy, fastening his lips on Billy's in a wet, open mouthed kiss, hips undulating against Billy's, grinding into him hungrily.

"Dommie." Billy's eyes opened, heavy with sleep, arousal and confusion. "What-"

Dom silenced Billy's questions, desperately plunging his tongue into Billy's mouth, fingers twisting at Billy's nipples eagerly, body trying to meld itself to Billy's.

"Billy," Dom whimpered. "Please, Billy. I want you."

"Dommie," Billy moaned, his hands moving to clasp Dom's hips tightly, fingers leaving marks in the pale skin. "Can't wait, Dommie. Need-"

"Yes, you can," Dom groaned into Billy's ear as his tongue licked around the shell, his teeth fastening on the lobe and tugging it gently. "You have, too," he continued, breathy words brushing against Billy's skin so he felt it as much as he heard it. "I want you inside me," he murmured. "Deep."

Billy threw his head back, neck taut, body strung bow-tight with the need to find the release that surged through him. A long mewling groan was torn from Billy's lips as he struggled to regain control of his body, and fighting desperately against the climax simmering through his body, bubbling just below his skin, begging for release, Billy thrashed wildly beneath Dom.

Worried about Billy's injury, watching him fight the wild, desperate, insistent need for completion that he could feel thundering through Billy's veins, Dom levered himself up until he was sitting upright. Straddling Billy's trembling thighs, Dom's heavy arousal brushed against his belly as he gently teased Billy's hands away. Closing his hand tightly around the base of Billy's throbbing, leaking erection, Dom's other hand gently stroked Billy's quivering belly, willing his lover to calm down.

"Baby," he crooned gently. "Breathe, Billy," he spoke softly. "Talk to me, Bills," he whispered. "C'mon, baby."

As his frantic thrusting slowed, Billy drew a long shuddering breath, and the eyes that had been squeezed shut tightly, opened, glazed with passion and need. Looking up at his young lover, one hand moving to stroke his bare thigh, Billy whispered, "Need you, Honey."

"I know, baby. I know," Dom answered as he slid off Billy's thighs, molding himself along Billy's side, his arousal rubbing against Billy's hip as he did. "I need you like I need air," he replied.

"Dommie, don't leave me like this," Billy murmured, turning his head to kiss Dom wetly.

"I wouldn't, Billy," Dom breathed against Billy's mouth. "But I want to feel you inside me." Dom sighed as Billy's hand closed over his heavy arousal. "I want you to make love to me, baby."

"Lube," Billy groaned, closing his eyes as he struggled to maintain the weakening grasp of his control.

“Don't move," Dom whispered, tearing himself away from Billy's hand.

Scrabbling with the fastenings on his pack with trembling hands, Dom pulled his belongings from the pockets, dropping them carelessly until his fingers closed around the small bottle he sought. Crawling back to Billy's side, Dom dipped his head and pressed an open mouthed kiss to the slick tip of Billy's arousal before leaning back and letting his tongue trail around his glistening lips, tasting his lover. Flicking open the bottle of lube with one thumbnail and squeezing it into his palm, Dom never broke eye contact with Billy as he parted his thighs and quickly prepared his body for his lover.

"You expect me to survive that," Billy whimpered, eyes feasting hungrily on the sight as he watched Dom slide two slick fingers into his own body.

Eyes heavy with arousal, Billy was utterly transfixed by Dom's sensual and erotic actions, and as one long-fingered hand stroked his impressive erection, the other plunged into his own body, scissoring and stretching himself quickly. Dom's head tilted to the side, his heavy lidded eyes fixed on Billy, breathless whimpers and moans tumbling from his lips.

"C'mere, Dommie," Billy groaned, his hand closed tightly around the base of his leaking erection, struggling against the climax thundering through him. "Please, Honey." Billy's other hand extended, reaching out for his lover, stroking his thigh. "I need you….now."

Golden flesh glistening with perspiration, Dom moved to straddle Billy, one hand sliding down Billy's belly to close around Billy's erection. As Dom lowered his body, his hand guided Billy until the blunt, slick end of his lover's arousal pressed against his stretched entrance. Leaning forward, Dom pressed his forehead against Billy's, willing his body to relax as he sank down, not pausing until Billy was buried deep inside him. Exhaling a long, hungry sigh as his slender body adjusted to Billy's intrusion, Dom pushed himself upright. Lacing his fingers with Billy's, Dom pulled his lover up until their eyes locked, and then his hands moved to frame Billy's head, their lips barely meeting and parting in messy, open-mouthed kisses as Dom's hips began to undulate slowly.

Neither man was going to last long, almost hyper-aroused, their hands caressing tenderly even as their mouths met passionately and their bodies slammed together hungrily. Dom's arousal, trapped between their bodies, ground against Billy's furry stomach, smearing his own fluids as he struggled to prolong the ecstasy screaming through him. Pressing his knees bruisingly tight against Billy's hips, Dom slammed his body onto Billy's thrusting arousal, and fingers dug almost painfully into Dom's hips as Billy bucked wildly, almost out of control in his need to find completion, buried deep inside Dom's tight body. Begging and whimpering profusely under Dom's heaving, thrusting body, Billy groaned, pleading incoherently for the release he so desperately needed.

Long thumbs traced Billy's perspiring cheekbones, drawing Billy's concentration back to his words as Dom looked into his eyes. Struggling with his traitorous body, Dom pressed a short, hard kiss to Billy's lips and pulled back.

"Now, Billy," Dom growled as he slammed down onto Billy's thrusts, his eyes narrowing into a frown as his control began to unravel against his will. "Now Billy…..for me."

Unable to maintain even a shred of his restraint, Dom's mouth devoured Billy's lips as his hips impacted slickly against Billy's pelvis, muscles clenching tightly around Billy's arousal as his own release pulsed against Billy's furry belly.

Tightly held in the desperate grip of his Dom's body, Billy could no longer withstand the need to let go of his restraint, and then his warm, pulsing release filled his young lover. Breathless, Billy sank bonelessly back to the bedroll beneath them, pulling Dom with him. Pressed together from shoulder to toes, Dom clasped Billy's sweaty face in his hands, kissing him long and tenderly as their heart rates slowly returned to normal.

Dom didn't need words to express his love, relief and devotion to Billy, for he wore his heart on his sleeve. Every touch, every kiss, every glance told Billy just how deeply Dom loved him, and as Dom's head rested against his racing heartbeat, tears filled Billy's eyes as he drifted back to sleep, cradled in Dom's loving arms.

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The pain in his head more an ache now, Billy realized, resting his head on one hand as he laid on his side, watching his young lover resting peacefully. Relaxed in sleep, Dom lay on his back, his head turned towards Billy, and tousled blond hair fell over his forehead, his lips slightly parted, long, dark lashes brushing his cheeks. One hand was pressed under Dom's cheek, the other riding low on his naked belly, palm flat, his elegant fingers resting just below his navel.

Eyes trailing down Dom's lithe body, Billy's smile broadened as he noticed Dom's morning erection, and dragging his attention lower, his grin softened as he realized that in his sleep, Dom had looped one of his feet between Billy's. Realizing that Dom had been unable to stop himself from touching Billy, even in sleep, a pang of sorrow and need swept through Billy. Body still caught in the grasp of pain medication, his warm, pliant lover wrapped up in his arms, Billy pressed a feathery kiss against the top of Dom's head and drifted back into his own dreamland again.


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Butterflies danced lightly across Billy's bare skin, their soft, teasing touch causing goosebumps to form all over his body. Warm and languid, his limbs heavy with sleepy satisfaction, Billy slowly opened his eyes. With the sun now high in the sky, Billy's attention was stolen, not by the blindingly, beautiful day, but by his Dom kneeling between his legs, lips pressing tiny kisses against the insides of Billy's splayed thighs.

"Morning, sweetheart," Dom murmured, looking up at Billy through his blonde fringe and long eyelashes.

"Come up here and say that properly, Dommie," Billy whispered, his legs falling open wantonly as his fingers tangled in Dom's mussed hair.

"Don't think so, Bills," Dom answered, grinning and then pressing a wet, open-mouthed kiss against the underside of Billy's arousal. "At least, not for a little while anyway."

"You still owe me a kiss, Honey." Billy gasped at the feel of Dom's lips against his flesh.

"Will this do?" Dom smiled sweetly as he pressed his lips against Billy's tip, flicking across the sensitive flesh with the tip of his tongue.

"For the moment," Billy sighed, the fingers of one hand twisting in Dom's hair, the other stroking his shoulder, gently caressing his neck, touching Dom wherever he could reach.

"Good," Dom murmured. "Cos I thought I might follow it up with this." Opening his mouth and sliding his lips along Billy's thick erection, Dom's tongue swirled and greedily lapped at the flesh in his mouth.

"Dommie, please," Billy whimpered, hips arching up into Dom's touch.

"Does that mean" Dom asked, his voice thick and husky as he pulled his mouth away and moved his face lower, pressing his lips against Billy's scrotum, licking and sucking before he spoke again. "That you like it?" Dom murmured before running his tongue along the underside of Billy's arousal again. Tongue swirling around the tip, Dom lapped at the tiny, leaking slit there before sitting back on his heels, gazing at Billy.

His own heavy erection evident, Dom's breathing was ragged as he looked deep into Billy's eyes, his lips swollen and slick, eyes cobalt dark with arousal. "Well, Bills?" Dom smiled as his fingers trailed featherlight up and down the inside of Billy's thighs. "Do you like it?"

"Can't believe you have to ask," Billy gasped.

"Want some more?" Dom asked, a cheeky grin lighting up his face. While his elegant hand trailed across the coarse hair, weighing Billy slowly, Dom's long fingers teased Billy's arousal and stroked it gently.

"Ohhhh God, Dommie," Billy cried out hoarsely, rapidly approaching incoherence. "Don't. Don't ever stop."

"Wouldn't it get-" Dom leaned forward, flicking his tongue across Billy's tip and blowing warm breath as he pulled away. "Boring if I were-" Dom let his lips slide along Billy's length, taking him into his mouth as far as he could, head bobbing up and down, tongue twisting sinuously around Billy as he sucked. Lifting his head, Dom trailed his long tongue around his swollen lips, collecting the glistening moisture that clung there after he released Billy. "To do this all the time?"

"Hell, no," Billy wailed, pressing his hips up, begging for Dom's touch.

"I think it would." Dom answered his own question before renewing the deep, swallowing suction on Billy's arousal.

Replacing his lips with his hand, Dom looked up at Billy. "We should save this for special occasions." Curling his lips over his teeth, and closing his mouth around Billy's tip, Dom sucked hard and fast, his tongue pressing into the tiny opening at the tip as his hand stroked Billy's length. Speed increasing as Billy's hips stuttered erratically off the sleeping bag, incoherent whimpers bubbling from Billy's bow-shaped lips.

"I've got other plans for you," Dom murmured as he sat back, his thumb brushing back and forth across Billy's saliva slick tip, "I'm pretty sure you're going to love it."

"Mmm?" Billy whimpered, eyes fixed on Dom's hand, hips jerking against the sensuous touch, a sheen of perspiration covering his pale skin.

"Mmmm?" Dom asked teasingly. "Cat got your tongue, Bills?" As Dom moved to straddle Billy's thighs, their erections almost bumped together, drawing a shuddering gasp from both of them.

"Something. Like. That," Billy ground out. "Please, Dommie."

"You see," Dom began as he leaned into Billy, letting their slick erections touch. "I woke up and found this delicious man in my arms," he explained as his fingers closed around their erections and stroked slowly. "I remembered," Dom gasped. "Promising to shag him through the bedroll." Whimpering, Dom released his hold on their flesh.

"Dommie. Don't. Tease." Billy arched up, desperate for friction on his aching arousal.

"Not." Dom shook his head, licking Billy's skin wetly. "''Splaining." He trailed his fingers over Billy's ribs as he moved higher. "You were so hard, Billy," he murmured. "Watched you." Closing his hand around Billy's erection, Dom positioned himself above his lover. "Need this, Bills." Without another word, Dom slowly lowered himself onto Billy.

"Dom. No." Billy's hand's flew to Dom's hips, trying to stop his descent "Not ready."

As Billy breached his entrance, Dom slid his body down until they were completely and intimately joined. "I am, Bills," Dom whispered into his ear. "I got ready while I was watching you sleep. Your dreams must have been hot," he murmured as he slowly lifted his hips. "I wanted to wake you like this."

"I swear," Billy groaned as Dom began to ease himself slowly back down. "You're killing me."

"Inch by tiny inch," Dom breathed as he undulated against Billy. "Right Bills?"

"Not. So. Tiny," Billy ground out, the fingers of one hand wrapping around Dom's throbbing erection, stroking him tightly.

"No," Dom gasped. "Not so tiny." Billy's fingers sliding across his throbbing arousal stole all thoughts of control from Dom's mind, his focus turning to holding on long enough to bring Billy pleasure.

"Won't. Last," Billy murmured, his teeth grinding together as he lifted his knees, pushing himself deeper against his Honey.

"Good. Time. Not. Long. Time," Dom whimpered, hands moving to rest against Billy's furry chest, his thumbs rubbing and stroking his nipples.

Pushing up into Dom, his head thrown back, eyes closed and neck taut, groaning whimpers tumbled from Billy's lips as his hips stuttered up to meet Dom's sweat-slick body.

Dom's movements against Billy, the way his lithe body clenched so tightly around Billy as he pushed, deeper, harder and faster into him, relentlessly drove Billy towards his completion. Body bow-string taut under his lover, Dom's knees squeezing his sides tightly, Billy opened his eyes, desperately seeking distraction from his own steamrolling climax.

Golden, sweat-slicked body wrapped in the sparkling halo of sunlight that enveloped him, head thrown back and eyes closed, Dom's lips moved as unintelligible words escaped. Long fingers pinched at Billy's nipples as Dom slammed down against him, over and over again.

Billy's fingers squeezed Dom's arousal firmly as he stroked him, tight and fast. All thoughts of finesse evaporated as their rhythm dissolved into frantic, erratic, sweat-slick grinding thrusts.

"Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes," Dom chanted wildly as his hips slammed harder and faster into Billy's. Control frayed and dissolved, Dom almost sobbed with pleasure as they hurtled into the abyss of blissful completion.

The tight, twisting grip was the last straw as Billy's calloused thumb brushed roughly against Dom's leaking tip, and his body rebelled against his iron will. Pleasure curled tightly at the base of Dom's spine and traveled through his whole body, tightening almost painfully before releasing like a starburst.

As Dom's intimate warmth spurted across Billy's fingers and stomach, his body clenched around Billy's aching arousal, shattering the final shreds of Billy's control. Finding his release deep inside his sweet, gentle lover, Billy's breath is ragged as he reaches up, his hands finding Dom's face and guiding their lips together.

"Time for your kiss," Billy murmured, pulling Dom's mouth to his.

Lips meeting wetly, Billy wrapped his arms around Dom tugging him closer, feeling their hearts beating against each other rapidly as they slowly began to calm. Heart rates slowing and bodies relaxing, Billy held Dom firmly to his chest as Dom attempted to begin to slide off of him.

"What was the special occasion?" Billy murmured into Dom's hair.

"Simple. The sun came up," Dom whispered, his lips pressing a trail of feathery kisses against Billy's shoulder as he spoke.

"I guess that's special," Billy replied.

"'Course it is, Billy." Sighing, Dom pulled back and looked into his lover's face. "You were here. I was here. The sun was shining. It's a special day in my books."

"Mine too," Billy said quietly. "We haven't got much longer, have we?" His fingers stroked up and down Dom's back slowly.

Dom shook his head against Billy's shoulder. "Two weeks," Dom whispered, voice tinged with regret.

Billy's heart missed a beat as he considered the prospect of life without his Honey.

Chapter 25

Comments

[loozy.livejournal.com]

Dang it, Billy, stop being so stubborn :(

[sassywitch.livejournal.com]

He's such a stubborn little git isn't he?

[crsty1961.livejournal.com]

Awe come on Billy admit you can't live with out him!!

[sassywitch.livejournal.com]

I don't think Dom can live without his Billy either. Do you?

Glad you're enjoying hon.

[daydreambeleevr.livejournal.com]

"You expect me to survive that," Billy whimpered, eyes feasting hungrily on the sight as he watched Dom slide two slick fingers into his own body."


hee. nope. me neither!



I swear," Billy groaned as Dom began to ease himself slowly back down. "You're killing me."

get in line, Billy! whew, this has been so wonderfully erotic.


Dom shook his head against Billy's shoulder. "Two weeks," Dom whispered, voice tinged with regret.

Billy's heart missed a beat as he considered the prospect of life without his Honey.

you just shattered me. I love it.


kerry =)

[sassywitch.livejournal.com]

*puts back together* Oh noes, Kerry can't shatter, there's still more.

*fans*

They are rather hot aren't they?

I'm so happy you're still enjoying.

[mystery-ink.livejournal.com]

yummmy....

[sassywitch.livejournal.com]

They are delish aren't they.

Glad you're enjoying.

[sourgreenapples.livejournal.com]

THE THINGS YOU DO, WOMAN. GOSH, THOSE LITTLE RABBITS, THEY NEVER STOP FUCKING DO THEY?

TWO WEEKS MY ASS. BILLY, I WILL KNOCK SOME SENSE INTO YOU MYSELF IF YOU KEEP BEING STUBBORN.

The caps were intentional. 31? Meep. Is that a typo or do we get another chapter????

[sassywitch.livejournal.com]

They are quite insatiable aren't they.

Nope Billy is quite the stubborn one, in two weeks he'll send Dom home, his stubborn knows no bounds.

no it was no typo.

[divinemadam.livejournal.com]

I printed out a couple of chapters to read at work while I proctored a test. I had to have something to do besides work and watching a student take a test for 3 hours.

I cannot believe you hurt Billy! I figured that one of them would have to get hurt, but I just expected it to be Dom instead. Dom was so strong and good during the whole ordeal. I loved grumpy Billy when Dom kept waking him up to check on him.

This last bout of hot sex? Damn girl! I'm surprised that both of them don't just fall dead afterward. They'd die happy. Add in the schmoopiness and we have almost happily ever after, except that Billy has his head in his ass.

My favorite lines:
"What was the special occasion?" Billy murmured into Dom's hair.

"Simple. The sun came up," Dom whispered, his lips pressing a trail of feathery kisses against Billy's shoulder as he spoke.

That's what I like, hot sex, and cheesey lines that are just this side of too much.

[sassywitch.livejournal.com]

Yay for printing fics, I always print dylan_dufresne's and take them to read later.

I had to hurt him, I love the original but just once I wanted her to be the strong one, so this filled in a hole or two for me.

I think the pair of them are incapable of having anything other than hot sex. Don't you?

Don't you just adore this Dom's un-selfconscious schmoopiness. He says what's in his heart whether it's cheesey or not.

[divinemadam.livejournal.com]

Dom's inexperience with these new emotions make him innocent in so many ways, so he is straight forward and says what's in his heart. There is no pretense about him. It wouldn't dawn on him that someone might find what he says cheesy.

I completely agree that Dom + Billy = hot sex. It's a mathematical truth.

[illiadri.livejournal.com]

There is some might stiffening properties in the air out at the site. Truly bracing. So much deliciously hot sex in just one chapter. You have a rate and beautiful talent *g*

[sassywitch.livejournal.com]

*blushes*

I think its more to do with how much they can't keep their sexy hands off each other.