FIC: Making Memories of Us (8/28)

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Title: Making Memories of Us
Authors: rawiyaparand and sassywitch
Pairing: Primarily Monaboyd, with a smattering of Ordaisy, Kargo, EmEli
Rating: NC-17 for graphic m/m and shock horror some het sex
Betas: The wonderful dylan_dufresne Much ♥
Archiving: all_sensation and glasgowhobbit , any others please ask first
Feedback: Yes, please. We live for it.
Header Art: Our wonderful header was created by loki_girl
Crossposted: to monaboyd and all_sensation
Disclaimer: No money was made from this, and this in no way is meant to imply anything about the sexual preferences or practices of anyone mentioned within this story. No matter how true they are.
Summary: Dom is injured, and Billy goes along with the hallucinations for his best friends sake; but is it really only for Dom?
WARNING: contains slash (men doing men), het, angst, and fluff. If any of this bothers you, please don't read.
A/N: Due to popular demand, after speaking to my wonderful co-author rawiyaparand we'll now be posting three days per week, Mondays, Wednesdays and Saturdays. Since we're all out of whack for this week, consider this one this weeks bonus chapter.
Previous Chapters: Here
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Three sets of eyes suddenly found the scenery very interesting. Billy shifted uncomfortably in his seat, looking at everything but Dom.

"Guys? Why is Viggo mad at Orli and Lij?" Dom looked at his friends who were desperately trying to avoid his gaze. "Billy?"

"We may have accidentally stuck our noses where they didn't belong," Orlando said, looking through the
rear-view mirror.

"Even though it was done with the best of intentions," Elijah chimed in.

"The best," Orlando agreed, his brown curls bobbing as he nodded his head. "Viggo just prefers to let fate handle things."

"Well, that doesn't sound so bad," Dom said. "What exactly did the two of you do?"

"What they're saying, Dommie, my love," Billy started to explain. "Is Viggo seems to think they're interfering by being here." He paused trying to phrase his response. "Viggo likes to leave things to fate, and sometimes he doesn't appreciate elves and hobbits meddling with fate."

"How are they meddling?" he frowned.

"We're here in Hawaii," Orlando said non-confidently. "We just thought that our presence would be the fastest way to make you remember things, such as your time filming Rings. Since we couldn't take you to back to New Zealand, we thought that we would bring New Zealand to you."
He looked at Elijah, eyes pleading for help.

"That's right," Elijah looked back, smiling widely at Dom. "Viggo just thinks that we should let you recover at your own time, that we shouldn't force you into remembering things. So he's coming to make sure we haven't scarred you for life or something."

"How can you scar me for life?" Dom asked with a sly grin. "Something tells me that I'm the one doing the scarring."

"Your doctor was very explicit Dommie," Billy spoke. "We've got to let you remember on your own."

"Viggo seems to think that we won't be able to keep our mouths shut and will hurt you more than we help," Elijah added.

"Don't sweat it," Dom shrugged with a wince. "I'm doing a shite job of remembering so far, I don't see how you guys can hurt me."

Billy reached out to grip his knee gently, then hold his hand, lacing their fingers. "You will, it just takes time."

Dom made a disbelieving face and rested his head on Billy's shoulder, eyes closing shut. Billy met Orlando's eyes, and they share a worried look. The trip to the airport continued in relative silence, Elijah's nervous chattering being replaced with soft music after a while.

"Baby? Wake up, we're here." Billy rubbed Dom's cheek, glad that he had been able to get some much needed rest.

Blue-grey eyes blinked open sleepily. "Didn't realize I was that tired."

"You'll need all the rest you can get," Billy whispered giving him a sly wink. They placed baseball caps on their heads and made their way anonymously into the airport.
Elijah nervously glanced around them as they walked through the airport.

"You know maybe this wasn't such a good idea?" he spoke softly "Individually we're okay but don't we kinda stand out together, especially since we're three hobbits and an elf?"

"Maybe you'd like to announce that over the PA?" Orlando asked glaring at him.

"He could be right Elfboy," Viggo stated as he fell into step beside them.

"Viggo." Dom opened his arms and waited for the expected hug.

"Dominic, how are you feeling?" Viggo asked as he embraced him tightly.

"I'm good, Vig. Getting better, thanks to Billy here," Dom smiled, pulling Billy closer to him. Viggo stared at Dom for a minute, making the younger man shift uncomfortably.

"Dominic," he said softly, causing him to look up into his eyes. "I'm glad you're feeling better." Viggo smiled and patted him on the back. "And I have no doubt that it's in large part to Mr. Boyd's miraculous healing capabilities."

"Good flight Viggo?" Billy asked as he extended a hand for shaking, only to be drawn into a tight, bear hug.

"Aside from an unexpected layover, it wasn't bad; it's nice to finally be here." He glanced at Elijah and Orlando over their heads.

"Elfboy. Ringbearer." He nodded curtly "Would you be so kind as to get my luggage. The hobbits and I will meet you at the car." Viggo looped one arm around Dom's waist and the other across Billy's shoulders and began to walk away without waiting for a response.

"So Dominic," he asked. "What happened and how do we make you better?"

"Surfing accident," Dom told him, looking at Billy for confirmation. "Guess Bills should have started with the swimming lessons first." Dom chuckled as the airport doors slid open, and they stepped out into the muggy, Hawaiian heat.

"Swimming lessons?" Viggo's eyebrows rose.

"Um, yeah. Dom can't swim, and I just assumed that he would have taken lessons by now. My fault, really," Billy said, looking at Viggo straight in the eye, hoping the Dane would understand what was going on.

"He's just having some difficulty remembering some things," Billy continued, indicating their arrival at the rental car.

Viggo nodded sagely, and they stood at the side of the car, awaiting the return of their companions and Viggo's luggage.

"Are you still under treatment?" Viggo placed his large hands on Dom's shoulders, pulling away as Dom winced. "Turn, Master Hobbit," he commanded and waited until Dom turned away from him. He lifted Dom's t-shirt away from his skin and surveyed the still angry bruising. His eyes met with Billy's and he nodded in understanding before he allowed the shirt to drop and folded his arms around Dom's waist, pulling him against his body for a tender, affectionate hug. Releasing him, he dropped to one knee as he turned and caught one of Dom's hands in his. "I'm at your disposal, Master Hobbit, until you need me no longer."
Dom looked from Viggo to Billy his eyes crystal with tears, thankful for Viggo's friendship and overwhelmed by his actions.

"Hey, you're pledging to protect the wrong hobbit!" Elijah's laughing voice called across the parking lot. "Aragorn protects the Ringbearer, not the pipe weed-smoking hobbit."

Elijah unlocked the trunk, placing Viggo's suitcase inside with a thud. Turning around, he smiled and batted his eyelashes, opening his eyes as wide as possible. He waited for Viggo to stand, then threw his arms around his waist.

"It's so good to see you, Vigs." He squeezed tightly, unconcerned that Viggo's arms lay loosely at his side. "And this is so totally not my fault. Blame Orli. He's older and wiser; he should have never listened to me. Kill him; I've got so much to live for."

"Hey!" Orlando protested, putting in the last of Viggo's bags. He pushed Elijah out of the way and wrapped his arms around Viggo's neck, kissing his cheek sloppily. "It was all his idea. I had nothing to do with it." Arms still wrapped around Viggo's neck, Orlando stuck his tongue out at Elijah. "Anyways, it's a known fact that Viggo and I put the "O.V." in love, there's no way he'd kill me."

"I smoke weed?" Dom's eyes opened wide. "None of you told me that. Do I have any other illegal habits?" He frowned his hand reaching for Billy's blindly. "Dammit, I must be such an asshole," he murmured as Billy pulled him into his embrace.

"It was props, Dom. The Hobbits smoke Longbottom leaf in pipes." His hands reached to frame Dom's face, turning him so that he was looking into his worried eyes. "It was only for Rings, baby."
Viggo reached out with one long arm to flick the back of Elijah's head. "One word for you two. Narsil. Remember that."

Dom, Viggo and Billy slid into the backseat, Dom sandwiched in the middle of his two friends. Orlando and Elijah exchanged roles, Elijah getting into the driver's seat, the two bickering at each other under their breaths.

"Now tell me; how is the recovery going? Are you scheduled to visit a professional?" Viggo asked Dom.

"I have my first visit with the psychologist tomorrow," he said quietly, hands holding on to Billy's tightly. "I'm not remembering too much. I'll feel something, but it'll be gone before I can remember or place it."

Viggo lifted his hand to Dom's chest, his hand over Dom's heart. "The memories are all in here," he spoke quietly "It might take a while for here," he pressed his hand to Dom's forehead(,) "to find the key, but I have faith that you have a key master that will help you." He glanced at Billy, and then turned back to Dom. "It will come, don't force it." He nodded sagely.

"You two are still happy?" he asked as he watched Dom sink back against Billy, his head resting on his shoulder.

Dom's face broke out into a large grin at Viggo's question, his neck and cheeks coloring lightly. "We are. He's great, Viggo," Dom whispered as if Billy would be unable to hear the conversation. "I can't remember, no pun intended, ever feeling this loved before in my life."

"You were, Dom," Viggo whispers back, sneaking a glimpse at a blushing Billy. "He's loved you for as long as he's known you. I wouldn't bet against him loving you before he knew what love was."

"Ahh, hello you two. Functioning ears over here," Billy spluttered, looking away from the intense, knowing gaze of his king.

"But he's right," Billy spoke truthfully "I knew I loved you even before I met you, I just had to realize it." He pressed a kiss to the back of Dom's neck, his lips brushing as delicately as butterfly wings over the discoloured flesh.

"Welcome to the Beach House of BillyDom, Viggo," Elijah spoke as they pulled into the driveway. As the car stopped, Orlando and Elijah climbed out, opened both rear doors and spiriting Viggo's suitcase out of the trunk and into the house before Viggo could catch them.

"Make yourself at home Viggo," Dom reached out to place a hand on his knee, "Thanks for coming; it means a lot to me."

"I'm here to help, Dominic," Viggo said softly, squeezing the hand on his knee. "We're all here to make sure that you get well soon."

The three climbed out of the car and made their way inside in time to hear Orlando and Elijah start on round three of their argument. Billy glanced over at Dom, who despite the smile on his face, looked tired and in pain. He cringed, noticing that not enough time had passed for Dom to have another painkiller.
Before he could say anything, Viggo put his arm around Dom's shoulder and began to lead him to his bedroom. "You look absolutely exhausted. Don't argue with me, you do," he stated matter-of-factly, pushing open the bedroom door. "Have a rest while we make lunch, and I'll send Billy in as soon as I'm finished chatting with him and the two trouble-makers."
Billy followed closely and ducked under Viggo's arm as they reached the bedroom door. Wrapping his arms around Dom's waist, Billy kissed him gently, then brushed the hair back from his face, and tucking some stray strands behind his ears.

"I won't be long Dom," he murmured. "You go lay down, I'll be in with some lunch as soon as it's ready."

"I love you," Dom murmured against his lips, as he leaned in for a long, tender kiss. "Don't be long." Billy watched as he walked into the room and closed the door behind him.
Billy walked beside Viggo the length of the hallway before he spoke. "I know. I'm the scum of the earth, right? Taking advantage of him like this."

Viggo stopped, placing his hands on Billy's shoulder. "You're not the scum of the earth. You're in love, and you've found the means to express that love. Am I happy with this situation? No. But I don't blame you."

He smiled at Billy and continued into the kitchen where Orlando and Elijah were making lunch preparations. "No, Billy," he said calmly, walking over to the counter and picking up a large knife. "I blame these two. So Elf, hobbit, I'm giving you five minutes to start talking, and you better make it good."

"To be fair Viggo, I could've said no. I had the chance. I should've. I could've, but I didn't. I was greedy, I couldn't walk away from him, and not take this with me."

"We're sorry Vig," Elijah spoke quickly "We thought we could handle things."

"Well, you couldn't," Viggo replied. "Have you learned anything?

"Don't meddle in other people's affairs?" Orlando said, sticking his bottom lip out for emphasis.

"Don't try to help your two lonely friends find happiness with each other?" Elijah said eyebrow rose. Viggo growled and the younger man ran to the opposite end of the kitchen. "I meant...What I meant to say was, don't meddle."

Viggo sighed, head shaking, as he placed the knife down. "And you, Billy? What has this taught you?"

Billy sat down at the kitchen table, head in his hands. "Don't ever listen to these two?"
Viggo shook his head.

"That I should have told Dom how I felt six years ago?"

Viggo nodded and opened his arms to his smallest hobbit. Billy happily walked into the embrace and returned it wholeheartedly "Don't worry," he released him "You, too, look like shit. Go now, I think there's a lonely young hobbit waiting for his love. You need to go and make good memories for the both of you."

Billy pulled out of Viggo's embrace and smiled at the older man before he turned on his heel and walked back down the corridor towards Dom's room. Viggo turned his attention back to his hobbit and elf. "What else have you two learned?"

Elijah and Orlando looked at each other nervously. "We've learned that when two people love each," Elijah began hesitantly, "the way that Orli and I love you. Well, when two people love like that, nothing can keep them apart?" Elijah bit his lip and looked at Orlando for help.
Orlando nodded and slowly moved towards Viggo. He hugged the older man, nuzzling his face in his neck. "What Elijah means to say is that we love you, Viggo. Don't we, Lij?"

Elijah joined the embrace, squeezing Viggo tightly around the waist. He looked up, giving his best puppy-dog eye impression. "Yes, we love our King."

"Hobbit? Elf?" Viggo said, the arms around him squeezing tighter, wet kisses being placed on his cheek.

"Yes, Viggo?" they chimed in unison.

"Run."

They both moved quickly putting the kitchen server between them and their King.

"Viggo," Orlando started to speak. "You don't really want to hurt us? Do you?"

"No," Viggo spoke softly, the glint in his eyes revealing his anger with them. "At this very moment, I'd like you both to share the fate of the Urak Hai." He closed his eyes, leaning on the counter top with both hands, letting his anger wash away before speaking again. "They're two of your closest friends. I can't believe you would set them up for such suffering deliberately, especially when you know they've suffered through six years of mutual, unrequited love."

"We didn't mean to hurt either of them," Orlando spoke.

"We don't know that they will get hurt yet," Elijah stated.

"How can they not? I can't believe that you two apparently have two functioning brains. Sometimes, I swear, you don't use either of them."

Elijah kicked the cupboard, startling both Orlando and Viggo. "Okay, fine. We shouldn't have done it, but I still believe it was the right decision. Dom loves Billy. I lived with him for six months, I was with him when he was depressed and wouldn't even leave the house. I used to try everything to get him to crack smile, nothing worked. Billy calls and leaves a message. A message, for God's sake, saying, 'Dominic, go out for a walk tomorrow.' And do you know what? The next day, the bastard was outside taking a walk!!"
Elijah took off his glasses, rubbing his eyes tiredly. "Dom woke up, and the only thing he knew was that Billy was his boyfriend. If we had told him he was wrong, it would have killed him. They're so happy, Viggo," Elijah looked at him with pleading eyes. "They smile, they touch, they keep us awake at night. What's so wrong with making our friends happy?"

"Because boys, you can't make two people happy. They have to find that happiness themselves."

"They did, we just had to give Billy a push in the right direction," Elijah murmured. "You weren't here, you didn't see Billy, you didn't hear him, he was broken Vig."

"And if Dominic decides he can't deal with Billy deceiving him when he gets his memory back, what then?
Who's going to pick up the pieces of their hearts when they don't even have their friendship anymore?" Viggo looked from one to the other of them. "That's what I thought." He sighed. "They deserve each other, yes, but not at the cost of one of the most beautiful friendships I have ever seen."

"So what do we do now, Viggo?" Orlando asked. "Do we get Billy to break it off with Dom? Do we start making up lies about all the bad things in their friendship? Do we tell him the truth? How do we not break their hearts?"

"We don't do anything, boys," Viggo said after a moment's thought. "We're going to sit back and wait. If, and only if, we're asked for help or advice, that's when we step in. Until then, we stay out."

"You've seen them, do you think they'll be alright?" Lij leaned on the counter. "They're even tighter than they were in New Zealand. It's like they share a brain at the moment."

"And a sex drive," Orlando stated dryly.

Viggo raised an eyebrow and leaned in closer "Think about it boys, they've been in love for six years, sure, we all know that, but with that love, there's lust. For six years they've been hard and wanting each other. Now there are no boundaries, no barriers that they have to hide behind. If that were you, what would you be doing?"

"Going at it like rabbits," Orlando said, now able to understand what Viggo was talking about.

"I have the pleasure of rooming next to them," Elijah said quietly. "And I know they haven't…you know…done it, yet. Billy was worried about what happens after. Should we stop them? A hand job, I'm sure they could work through afterwards. Hell, we've all done it once in a bar when drunk, I'm sure. But full-on sex?"

Viggo shrugged his shoulders. "Hopefully, Dom's memory returns before they reach that stage. If not, we're just going to have to pray that their friendship is strong enough."

"If theirs isn't strong enough, then there's no hope for the rest of us." Orlando shook his head "There is no stronger is there?"

"Not in my experience," Viggo replied. "Shouldn't you two be making lunch?" he raised an eyebrow at them. "Perhaps we should keep them busy, keep their minds off each other."

"A, not going to happen, and b, I thought we weren't going to interfere?" Elijah asked as he grabbed ingredients from the fridge.

Viggo's eyes narrowed and Orlando quickly covered his mouth when he saw the grapes in Viggo's hand. With deadly accuracy, Viggo threw each grape at its target. "It never hurts to try, Master Hobbit, and it's not interfering, it's distracting."

"Oww," Elijah whined, rubbing the back of his head. "It's just not interfering because it's your plan."

"Exactly." Viggo popped a grape into his mouth and winked at Elijah. "So, tomorrow afternoon, after Dom's appointment, I want the two of you to take Billy out, while Dom and I spend some time together."

"Dom has a perfectly lovely beach as his backyard," Orlando spoke. "What if we organize a barbecue for dinner tonight and maybe get the two of them to get their guitars out?" he shrugged. "It might be fun."

"Well it's gotta be more fun then watching ourselves poncing around in middle earth….again," Elijah sighed.

"What do you want to spend time with Dom for?" Orlando frowned. "And besides, they're practically surgically joined, Billy's never more than a few feet from Dom; he's not going to go anywhere."

"A barbeque is a fantastic idea." Viggo opened a few cabinets before finding the plates he was looking for. "It'll get Dom outside in the fresh air, and maybe playing his guitar will spark a few more memories."

He set the table for five and walked to the counter where Orlando and Elijah were preparing a salad and sandwiches. Standing close to Orli, he reached down and stole a carrot. "As for my need to spend time with my sick friend, Orlando," he said stressing the boy's name, "That's none of your business. Just know that tomorrow, you will be going out with Billy, and I will be spending time with Dom. Any questions? Good."

"I'm just saying it's not going to be easy to separate them, Billy seems determined to spend every minute with him, just in case his memory comes back and he's lost some time they could have had, I guess."

"Can you blame him?" Lij asked.

"I didn't say anything." Orlando frowned. "How did I get to be the bad guy here?"
Viggo hugged Orlando. "There is no bad boy, just misguided idiots," he stared pointedly at Elijah as he plucked a cherry tomato from the bowl in front of him. "But it's all good now. Your King is here." He grinned manically. "I'm going to change my clothes. Can I trust you two not to screw up before I get back?"

"Yes, Your Majesty."

"Yes, my liege."

Both boys waited until the door to the guest room closed before releasing deep sighs of relief. Elijah slumped against the counter clutching at his heart. "I'm still alive! Oh, sweet mercy, I'm still alive."
Orlando laughed and patted his friend on the back. "Yeah, there were times when I was sure we were done for. So, do you think it'll work?"

"Of course it will work," Elijah said incredulously. "This is Viggo we're talking about. He's going to do the same thing that we were going to do, but get better results and all the credit."
Orlando shrugged. "If it ends with them happy, it's all good."

"So the question would be, now that we have lunch," he waved his arm over the bounty they had prepared. "Do we go and tell them, and risk permanent retinal damage, because I swear, I love them, but I do not need to see that. Or do we leave a tray at their door and run away because encountering risk of nakedness or God forbid, shagging, or my personal favourite, do we leave it for the King and let him get a dose of what we've had?"

"Leave what for the King?" Viggo spoke waking back into the kitchen dressed in lime green floral board shorts and an equally vivid pink sleeveless tee shirt with wide armholes that showed the corded muscles of his chest.

"Damn, Vig," Orlando laughed, momentarily ignoring the question. "Where did you get those clothes?"

"Am I to take fashion advice from the boy who wears yellow socks?" Viggo scoffed. Before Orlando could respond, he continued, "I will have you know that this was all the rage the last time I was in Hawaii."

"The last time you were in Hawaii, there was a war in Vietnam and Hendrix was playing at Woodstock," came Elijah's cheeky response, earning him a heated glare from Viggo.

"Now, what is being left for me?"

"We thought that it would be easier, and less harmful to our retinas, if you woke up the two lovebirds."

"There will be no retinal damage, Ringbearer, the expression of love is a beautiful thing. You should revel in the knowledge that you are privileged enough to witness it."

"It's not so beautiful when it's two horny hobbits, Viggo," Orlando laughed "Now if it were two Slayers, maybe, but hobbits, not so hot."

"You have no soul, young Mr. Bloom, no soul at all." Viggo shook his head as he collected a tray filled with all they could need for lunch. "I trust you two can eat on your own? I think I shall dine with my hobbits." He carried the tray from room without waiting for an answer.

Comments

[crsty1961.livejournal.com]

Oh boy this is the best kind of bedtime story and I love you Viggo!!

[wanderlost.livejournal.com]

Hope your dreams were pervy! Speaking of dreams, isn't Viggo dreamy? *sighs longingly*

[starlingthefool.livejournal.com]

Whee! Viggo! *does a little dance* The dialogue between him and Orlando and Elijah is brilliant.
I love this fic. It's so sweet.

[wanderlost.livejournal.com]

*dances with you* Thank you, especially for commenting on the dialogue between the boys. It means a lot!

[starlingthefool.livejournal.com]

Happy to oblige. I love the threats of Narsil. Heh.
More coming soon, I hope?

[http://users.livejournal.com/travelqueen_/]

Brilliant story.
I love it :))

[wanderlost.livejournal.com]

*squees*

Thank you! ♦

[owlgrey.livejournal.com]

I love sensible and strong Viggo with the 'naughty boys' Elijah and Orli.

[wanderlost.livejournal.com]

And they are naughty, aren't they? Viggo will keep them in line, or threaten them with death, one or the other :P

[emily-112.livejournal.com]

Love this! It's great, I love the relationships between them all and the interaction is brilliant. Cant wait for the naxt part! :)

[wanderlost.livejournal.com]

Thank you! It's not hard to write a loving relationship between all of them- one look at old premiere photos show how much they care for each other.

*sobs* I miss those days *sobs more*

[emily-112.livejournal.com]

Omg!Me too! *passes you tissues then sobs as well*

And everytime I see pics of Dom he always looks so sad these days. :( But yeah, I am totaly loving this fic! lol

[wanderlost.livejournal.com]

I think the LotR cast should have a big get-together. They spent how many years filming and promoting these movies, it's a shame to see them apart. I saw new photos of Cate and Orli TOGETHER and I fangirled madly. Elves! Yay!

[emily-112.livejournal.com]

Yeah that would be great! And they should film it all so we can watch! Haha, yeah it is a shame to see them apart.

Oooo I dont think I've seen those photos, but when you say together you dont mean together, together? Do you?

[waqaychay.livejournal.com]

ah, viggo, the voice of reason. :D elijah and orli are just too cute in this. and billy and dom are so sweet together. i really hope dom doesn't end up hating billy for this. but then, how could he, really? love the story, girls!

[wanderlost.livejournal.com]

You'd think he'd be the voice of reason, huh? We'll see..really, we will have to see, cuz this was written so long ago that I forget what happens next! Haaa

Oddly, I wrote Elijah during my I-hate-Elijah spell. Suzy had to do everything in her power to keep me from killing me off!

Hmm. Maybe Dom will hate Billy. Maybe Billy will hate Dom. Maybe Billy and Dom will hate VigOrlijah (has anyone written that threesome, cuz yum). Who knows ;)

[waqaychay.livejournal.com]

well, if viggo has any reason at all, he'll talk elijah and orli into shagging him on dom's living room couch. ;P

you can't tell that you wrote this when you didn't like elijah. he really does come off as a lovable friend. btw, have you seen the new laptop commercial with elijah sitting on some lady's lap on a plane? so adorable! makes me want to do unspeakably dirty things to him. *heh heh*

someone out there has to have written vigorlijah. it's too yummy to pass up! *lol*

[wanderlost.livejournal.com]

*cough* I wish. EmEli, alas, you can blame Suzy for that :P

Haa. I saw the laptop commercials. Unfortunately, I saw them after the Elijah fangirls had seen them and over-squeed. So when I finally saw it, I was a bit disappointed. The girls were going on like he was humping her leg or something.

Hmm. I wonder. I remember one VigOrlijah; it was a really heavy BDSM fic. I had never read some things before I read that story. It was...educational, shall we say!

[daydreambeleevr.livejournal.com]

sorry for the embarrassingly long feedback, but there was just too much goodness to chose from!


"You were, Dom," Viggo whispers back, sneaking a glimpse at a blushing Billy. "He's loved you for as long as he's known you. I wouldn't bet against him loving you before he knew what love was."

That's a lovely description. :smile:


"Yes, Viggo?" they chimed in unison.

"Run."

the entire passage between Viggo, Elijah and Orli is just fantastic! Why do I see a future for Elijah and Orli, that no matter how old they are, they'll still be called "Ringbearer" and "Elfboy". you just know it's true! *giggle* i also loved how calming Viggo's presence is for Billy. this should help him with his guilt.


"It never hurts to try, Master Hobbit, and it's not interfering, it's distracting."

"Oww," Elijah whined, rubbing the back of his head. "It's just not interfering because it's your plan." omg. funny. funny. funny!


i can't stop quoting from this fic!
"The last time you were in Hawaii, there was a war in Vietnam and Hendrix was playing at Woodstock," came Elijah's cheeky response, earning him a heated glare from Viggo.

sooo good! you just have the best rhythm going here. i love the back and forth banter.

cannot wait for the rest of this!

kerry =)

[wanderlost.livejournal.com]

Awww. *melts* Kerry, you leave the best feedback!!

This was my first attempt at writing a real story (can't believe Suzy took the chance, yikes!) and I'm still very nervous about it. The long breaks between postings were completely my fault. I think that's why Suzy's decided to take over posting duties :P

It makes me stress just a little less when we get comments like this. I don't suck! Yay!!!

Thank you, so so much :0)

[sourgreenapples.livejournal.com]

OMG. I love this fic. The plot is soooo good. I can't wait for the next part.

[wanderlost.livejournal.com]

Hee! Thank you. It's odd that there aren't many "let me take advantage of my friend suffering from amnesia" fics, are there ;)

Billy: *I'm not taking advantage of him!*
Me: *you are*
Dom: *that's okay, Bills. I like it!!*
*groping and kissing and cooing ensues*

[emma-took.livejournal.com]

I really love this! They are all so perfectly written and the story is great!!! cant wait for more!

[divinemadam.livejournal.com]

Just read the last 4 chapters. This is so wonderful! Poor Billy, my heart just breaks for him. I do love Viggo. He will make things all better, right? I can't wait to see what happens when Vig walks into the room with Dom and Billy!