You Said

[ceartas.livejournal.com]

Title: You Said
Author: ceartas
Pairing: BB/DM
Rating: PG
Summary: just a little drabble, 100 words exactly
Feedback: Is better than chocolate covered Dom. Wait...no it's not. But almost. ;o)
A/N: I kinda like this little stream of Monaboyd that's flowing again. I guess The Muse decided she wanted to play again.






I said, "Come home, you're working too hard."

I said, "Come home and walk through the green fields again."

I said, "Come home and dream on the veranda."

I said, "Come home and read by the fire."

I said, "Come home, before Hollywood eats you alive."

I said, "Come home, try doing a few stage shows instead."

I said, "Come home, before you forget who you are."

I said, "Come home, before they forget who you are."

I said, "Come home, I miss you."

I said, "Come home, I love you."

I said, "Come home."

You said, "I am home."

Comments

[trulybloom.livejournal.com]

Is this supposed to be sad? It's kind of sad. If "you" is Dom, it sounds like he stayed in Hollywood, it sounds like he's saying that he is already home, instead of with Billy, wherever Billy is.

[ceartas.livejournal.com]

Yes, that's it exactly. I felt a little melancholy this evening and when the idea popped into my head, Billy was a little down too. So I left it that way.

Your icon is sooo cute! :o)

[trulybloom.livejournal.com]

Well, I definitely got a feeling of isolation from Billy's words -- him stuck alone all the way away in Scotland, and Dom pleasantly oblivious (despite Billy's words) in LA. It's a nice piece - very poetic in it's simplicity. (and thanks for the kind words about my icon. It seemed more appropriate than my other one where they're gazing at each other longingly.)

[ceartas.livejournal.com]

::hugs you:: I'm so glad that you liked it, but I'm even happier that you understood the point I was trying to make. ::beams:: Thank you.

[ceartas.livejournal.com]

Thank you for reading! :o)

(and I loooooooove your icon. hehehehe.)

[owlgrey.livejournal.com]

This was gorgeous! Such clever but simple use of words!

[ceartas.livejournal.com]

Awwwww. You're going to spoil me with your kindness!! ::blushes::

[owlgrey.livejournal.com]

Do you mind if I friend you? I'd like to keep an eye on your writing because I love it.

[ceartas.livejournal.com]

Oh, please do! I've already friended you. :oD ::feels all warm and squishy::

::whispers:: I do have older stuff archived and I'll make a post in my journal with the link once I update it with the new stories.

[owlgrey.livejournal.com]

Cool!

[pippin1983.livejournal.com]

that was SAD =( *sniffs*

[ceartas.livejournal.com]

::hands you a tissue:: Yes, it was. Made me sad too. I think I'll have to write some fluffy stuff now.