([identity profile] ceartas.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] monaboyd Aug. 6th, 2005 06:19 pm)
Title: Walking
Author: [livejournal.com profile] ceartas
Pairing: BB/DM
Rating: G for general schmoopiness
Summary: Billy and Dom go for a walk
Feedback: Makes me feel warm and squishy, like hot cocoa on a cold winter's day.
A/N: Sorry, tis un-beta'd this time around, so please let me know if I goofed somewhere.






If walking in silence is meant to be frigid, then surely I’ll freeze to death. If walking in silence is meant to be wearisome then surely I’ll have calluses on my feet. If walking in silence is meant to be unforgiving, then surely I’ll die unloved. If walking in silence is meant to be solitary, then surely I’ll always be alone. If walking in silence means being close to you, then surely I’ll take my chances.

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You said it was cold outside and I ought to wear my scarf. I asked whether I should take the fuzzy greenish brown one or the bright yellow knit and you told me it didn’t matter, as long as I grabbed one. I guess I took too long because you left without me and I ran out the front door, yelling for you to wait.

I didn’t have a scarf.

You stopped to wait for me, as I gasped for breath and clutched my side. You shook your head, knocked me upside mine and tied your bright red woollen scarf around my neck. I heard you mutter something under your breath that sounded like “stupid git” but there was a smile in your voice so I forgot about it.

We walked for a long time, neither of us speaking. They say that silence is golden, but I don’t agree. Gold seems like something unattainable and when we’re alone, we never say a word. Our silence is like green grass after a summer rain shower. It happens all the time but there’s always something new and refreshing about it.

I snuck a peek at you out of the corner of my eye. That’s the best way to see you, when you’re not looking. Because then I see who you really are. Your hands were in your coat pockets, like usual and your nose was starting to turn red from the chill in the air. I suggested that we turn back, it would be dark soon. You said not yet, it was nice out here.

We kept walking and it began to snow tiny flakes that melted as soon as they touched down. I held out my mittened hand to catch them, but trying to catch a snowflake can be like trying to hold a sunbeam. Instead I closed my eyes and let them fall like icy needles on my tongue. I didn’t notice that you had stopped until I felt something hit my back and explode. I turned around and you stood there, an impish grin on your pixie face and a devilish glint in your emerald eyes.

Let’s go home, you said and I nodded. You held your hand to me and I clasped it greedily. I’ll make cocoa and you can start a fire? you asked and I nodded again, loath to tread upon our silence, making it impure.

As you opened the door and stepped through, you turned back to smile at me. Don’t forget your scarf next time, Dom.

I won’t.

From: [identity profile] sassywitch.livejournal.com


That was beautiful, and I agree all warm and smooshy and just perfect

From: [identity profile] mystery-ink.livejournal.com


I like the mood of this story - thank you!

BTW... where is that shot of Billy from? Such a wonderfully relaxed smile.

From: [identity profile] sassywitch.livejournal.com


I know, I think Dom and Billy are possibly the best scarf wearers I've yet seen, Lij is just weird with a scarf, but I do love that photo.

From: [identity profile] mystery-ink.livejournal.com


Beautiful expression, and light in his eyes - thank you!

From: [identity profile] arwen1682.livejournal.com


That was so sweet, I was in the mood for sweet Monaboyd, you gave me that alright, so thanks :D

That shot of Billy is beautiful, his smile is like *gasp* oi...

From: [identity profile] owlgrey.livejournal.com


That is the most beautiful thing I have read for a long time!

From: [identity profile] arwen1682.livejournal.com


Yeah I did, it's now in my Billy collection, that's a beautiful pic, thanks!

From: [identity profile] nickelsandcoats.livejournal.com


I just. have no words. This was gorgeously balanced and very carefully worded, by which I mean that every word was just..vital to the story. I wish I could describe better how this moved me, but I can't seem to articulate it well.

Beautiful job.

(And to spam your comment, I would stay and chat, but I have a blasted early class every day, which is why I haven't been on hardly at all. I miss you too! /answering your other comment as I'm lazy and should've been in bed half an hour ago)

From: [identity profile] lyss-monaghan.livejournal.com


Shit, I missed this one.

And of course, I squeed like a lunatic. I loff simplicity ones.

*iz ridiculously happeh that Writer!Chelley's back*

From: [identity profile] lyss-monaghan.livejournal.com


Dude. And how long was I gone?! I could only go through my LJ users flist and that took 3 hours as it was, going back to skip=450, NO JOKE!

From: [identity profile] lyss-monaghan.livejournal.com


WELL. I look back and I read stuff! To see what my peeps are doing, because I'm a VERY DEVOTED FRIEND. HAH.

(omg yay for the phrase Me? Fail English? That's UNPOSSIBLE!!!!!!!!)

From: [identity profile] lyss-monaghan.livejournal.com


*cocks eyebrow, no pun intended on first word, considering where this convo is in*

(wannacomeover?myGodI'mlisteningtotoomuchDaneCookbuthe'ssofunnyandhetalksaboutloveandstuffandTRYREADINGTHISNOW!MWAHAHAHAHAHA!)
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